Wow, I was not at all expecting the response that I got to that last post. I'm quite honestly shocked. Anyway, I have come up with my plan for guaranteed success! It is as follows:
Step 1: I'm going to finish watching the entirety of Battlestar Galactica prior to restarting the fic. Hopefully that will lead to me actually understanding the universe a bit better, rather than basing it on around 2 episodes.
Step 2: I will re-watch certain key episodes of the series, and figure out where I want the story to take place.
Step 3: I will write one or two oneshots in the universe of BSG, and likely a short BSG/ Mass Effect crossover in order to get used to writing the characters
Step 4: I will actually rewrite Collision Course. Hopefully.
That is the plan, thanks again for the massive amount of support, which again, i wasn't expecting at all. Also, I just want to let everyone know that I'm not exactly the best at following through on things, so it will likely be a while until I actually post anything.
If you want to learn more abut what progress I've been making, check out my bio!