I'm so happy yay, every little review means so much to me and to the person who pointed out my " " mistake, I noticed that but I didn't notice it until I had already posted the chapter unfortunately.
I made that mistake because I had no sleep but now I'm wide awake again, I'll probably get a few more chapters in tonight.
Thank you Bluebaby3296 for the contructive critisim.
Thecookielives27, your review was very inspirational, honestly:)
THANK YOU EVERYBODY WHO TOOK THEIR TIME TO REVIEW!!
I almost died with happiness when I seen that there was NINE reviews:)
Also Lil Miss Rosalie - Bella will be 14 when shes a vamp:) so only one year difference.
I'm so excited to see if I get anymore reviews tonight, I could even rival Alice's excitement.:)
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Chapter Four
Bella's Pov
I felt myself being carried by a ice scuplture, but I couldn't open my eyes, I was too I remembered Doctor Cullen was taking me to his home.
I opened my eyes to find myself being carried by Doctor Cullen who had a sheepish expression on his face. I couldn't help but let out a giggle.
"Find this funny do you?" He used a mock anger, I could tell because I could still see the faint traces of a smile in his face.
He set me down and then I got a full view of his house.
It was a beautiful three story house. The door was beautifully carved as where all the windows.
there was lots of flower pots on the porch filled with a ranbow variety of colours and there was a Alice in the doorway.
Wait a minute...
I had to blink to make sure I knew what I was seeing. She wasn't there a moment ago.
She skipped towards me. "See! I told you we would become best friends!" She looked as though she was about to squeal with excitement but I seen Carlilse cast her a warning glace and she calmed down...well a little bit.
"Calisle, some of the others wont be back until later." Alice was now looking Carlisle in the eyes with a very serious manner. I sensed a double meaning behind those words.
Then I seen Alice's lip tremble and I looked at Carlisle, his lips were also trembling.
When I looked in their eyes it looked as though they were having a conversation but before I could comment on it, it was already over.
"Ok Bella, lets come in." Carlisle smiled warmly at me.
"One of my daughters Rosalie and one of my sons Emmett is here and my beautiful wife is also here." I could see his eyes lighten up at the word wife.
Alice took my hand and led me into the house.
I looked up and there was a big, I mean BIG body builder man standing about two centimetres from my face.
I gasped in shock and fell backwards on my bottom. He then looked dumbstruck for a moment before letting out a large booming laugh.
"Well, who is this then!" He offered me a hand up, then mumbled something about my tiny hands.
I then noticed the most beautiful woman I have ever seen in my whole life standing beside him, the phrase 'if looks could kill' came to mind because this woman absolutely hated me, I could tell.
The glare on her face and the hate radiating from her body told me it all.
I nervously gulped. "My name is Isabella Marie Swan but you can call me Bella."
No-one answered, the air was so thick with tension I felt like I couldn't breath.
My breathing started comming in as gasps and I laid one hand over my chest and one on the back of the sofa for support and closed my eyes.
"Bella, Bella!, is something wrong." I heard Carlilses panicked voice.
"It's ok Carlisle." I breathed
"J-just tired.." I felt my vision clouding up, I wouldn't faint. Not now.
As I turned around all the Cullens looked panicked, even Rosalie. I blinked trying to clear my vision but then I couldn't open my eyes.
"Bella!" I heard someone yell but I wasn't sure who.
Why...why am I so weak?
I thought I heard the frount door opening before I felt myself falling forward and I succumbed to the darkness.
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Ok this chapter might not be as long but I'm going to update again later:)
Now people PLEASE review, you have no idea how happy reviews give me and the motivation It'll give me to update again soon.
THANK YOU SO MUCH AGAIN EVERYONE!