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Chapter Four

Esme's Pov

"Oh my, who is that?" I walked in at the same moment that Edward and Jasper did, they looked just as shocked as me to see a young girl scooped up in Alice's arms.

Was the young girl staying here for dinner? Oh no! I only had two hours to go to the supermarket and get some food and cook her a decent meal, the poor thing looked as though she hadn't had a decent meal in months.

"Who is that?" Edward asked and he looked at Alice suspiciously.

"Alice!" He shouted and unconcious girl Alice was carrying flinched.

He then added. "Alice, if you're going to hide your thoughts from me atleast pick a better song to sing repeatedly in your head, the repetitive beat of 'Womaniser' is one of the most annoying things, the only thing more annoying is you singing it."

Emmett then began whistling and looking around with shifty eyes before leaving the room.

Something suspicious was definitely going on.

"Carlilse, why is a human girl in our house?" Edward whispered too low for human ears to detect.

"She's from work, I invited her over so she wouldn't have to stay in the house alone while her father was at work, he won't be home until around .

"Mmm, where am I?" The young girl opened her eyes and turned her face away from Alice's shoulder then she looked back at Alice.

"Wow Alice...you're pretty strong.." She half mumbled and I heard Emmett chuckle from the garage.

I approached her and I was shocked once I saw her face, she was really beautiful and she had the most unique eye colour. She had big wide innocent eyes and long brown hair that had gentle curls in it. She also had a little tiny nose and her lips were silently parted as she was taking in my appearence.

"Hello dear, my name is Esme Cullen, I'm Doctor Cullens wife." I was standing right beside her and leaning down slightly so we had eye contact.

"Hello My name is Bella Swan." Now that she was fully awake I heard her soft clear voice.

"Oh please dear, call me Esme." I smiled at her and she beamed up at me and I began beaming myself. I noticed Carlisle, Alice, Jasper and Rosalie noticeably relaxed and Edwards eyes narrowed in on them.

"Oh Carlisle dear, I must be going to the supermarket to get food for the dinner." Carlisle smiled at me and I sent Edward a warning glance Edward I know they're hiding something from you but please remember we currently have a guest.

He nodded and I noticed Bella look up at him.

She immediately looked away and blushed. Oh how cute, it looks like she has a crush on him. Edward then directed his glare at me and I giggled.

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Alice's Pov

Once Esme had left Rose then left the room to go find Emmett.

I looked at Bella and followed her gaze, she was staring longingly at Edward's piano.

"Bella do you play piano?" She blushed and nodded, oh she's just so cute!

"Would you like to play it?" Edward offered and Bella nodded Bella then slowly walked towards Edwards piano the 'love of his life'.

"Bella! Have you ever composed your own songs?" I beamed at her.

"Yes...but they aren't very good. Would you like to hear one Alice?." She looked up at me.

I nodded and sat down on the piano bench and she sat down beside me.

Rosalie and Emmett and Carlisle were now in the room unknown to Bella and Jasper and Edward had seated themselves on the sofa.

Bella closed her eyes and took a deep breath like how Edward does before he plays.

Then she began playing it was beautiful and I was shocked at how fast her fingers were moving over the keys and she closed her eyes for moments of time before opening them. The song was beautiful, just as good as one of Edwards compositions.

I looked over at Edward and his jaw was hanging open. I heard Emmett and Jasper chuckle as they took in Edwards appearence before he snapped his jaw shut.

Bella had her eyes closed until the last note played and then she sat still for a moment before opening her eyes and looking at me. She then noticed everyone else in the room and blushed a bright crimson colour. She looked really nervous and embarrased and then I felt Jasper send a wave of calm through the room.

Bella's eyes snapped up to Jaspers. "How did you do that?" I could feel the shock in her voice and I watched as horror washed across Jaspers face.

I felt myself being sucked into a vision.

A vampire with blonde hair, red eyes and a very sinister expression across his face is sniffing Bella's neck.

"You do have a very nice scent..floral somehow..simply mouthwatering."

"It's truly a shame Edward had to fall in love with you."

Bella whimpers.

The blonde vampire leans down and sinks his teeth into Bella's neck before he is ripped off Bella by Edward.

"Edward.." Bella whimpers before Edward is slammed backwards across the room and into a mirror.

-Vision end-

Edward snapped his eyes away from me.

"Bella, Jasper didn't do anything." He stared straight into her eyes.

"Yes he did! I saw him." She glared back at Edward.

"Bella, I'm afraid you are delusional...has Carlisle been giving you any medication..what is your illness anyway?" Edward was trying to change the subject and failing miserably.

I could see the rage building in Bella. "I am not delusional! I know Jasper did it and stop trying to change the subject. Alice! you know Jasper did it don't you?" Bella looked at me silently pleading.

"I'm sorry Bella I have no idea what you're talking about." Bella looked betrayed but what she did next astonished me.

"Liar!" Bella shouted as loud as she could before falling to the ground coughing violently.

I went over to check if she was ok and just as I was about to touch her she looked me in the eyes and whimpered. "Don't touch me Alice Cullen."

I felt my heart break.

"Carlisle..*cough cough* can you please take me to the hospital...? *cough cough* something is wrong..." She kept wincing everytime she coughed or even spoke.

What had Edward and I done?

I looked towards Edward and seen him silently asking himself the same question.

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