So uh... its been so long sorry. busy with school damn English teacher gave me two projects in two weeks. three total, but the two were so stressful. Blah! well there done and my not very popular story will move foward. I saw the butterfly Effect like 2 weeks ago for the first time. OMG!! Its in my top 5. Pretty sure i cried the whole time. luckily i was alone! hehe. it was on Fox i think so i turned it on and got hooked. oh well... heres the sucky ch 5. I wrote this at like different times so sorry if it doesn't make sense at times. giggle giggle!
Chapter 5: The Bleeding
It's the sunny beach of Venice, California. Donna and Eric are packing for the day at the beach. It was a good Saturday until a knocked was heard at the door. Donna makes her way over to the door to find a short brunette standing there. She noticed that she had been crying and wondered why.
"Jackie uh… nice to see you spontaneously shows up her at my house and crying too." Donna didn't really know what to say. It was awkward for her to see Jackie standing there. She hadn't seen her in 2 years. Jackie dropped her stuff and walked over to her friend and cried on her shoulder.
"I'm sorry for showing up all… randomly" she thought. "I just… I don't know where else to go." She cried into her friends shoulder.
"Umm… okay. Well sit down and we'll talk. So I can help you." Donna actually felt kind of bad for her she had never seen Jackie cry so much. They sat down. "Okay spill it Jackie." Donna replied wiping her face with a Kleenex. They paused from talking because they heard whistling coming from the stairs.
"Hey Donna, I'm… Jackie?" Eric dropped the towels and covered up his body. "What the hell is she doing her?" Eric said in a squeaky voice.
"Hey Eric, umm… it's nice to see you too." Jackie said while she laughed at him.
"Well anything to help." Eric said happily. They both just starred at him weird. Did he actually befriend Jackie?
"Eric, are you okay?" Donna put her hand on his head. "Are you sick?"
"What no… Donna… no… I am just tired of fighting and stuff. I guess." he shrugged and walked off. Donna took Jackie to sit. They talked then got to the major subject.
"So Jackie, why were you crying? What did Mark do?" Donna said in a abrupt tone.
"It's not him." Jackie added quickly. She had her head resting on her hand. "Okay… its Steven." She removed her hand shot it out. She suddenly got up.
"Umm… Jackie I thought you two were over?" Donna stopped. "For good." she added.
"Yea, but then I got this letter." Jackie pulled out the letter from her purse and held it out. Donna gazed at the letter then Jackie then the letter again before grabbing it and reading it. Moments passed, "That's not all either" Donna looked up at her friend. "Before I got the letter he came up and saw me. God it was so awkward. I mean I hadn't seen him in like a year then he just shows up at my front door. Well, I guess my ex's front door, but I mean…"
"Jackie!" Donna shut her up "Shhh, Jackie I think it would be a good idea to talk to Hyde." Donna said with Jackie raising an Eyebrow.
"But Donna I mean c'mon Steven Hyde doesn't talk. He just gets you to fall for him… then cheats on you and stabs your heart." Jackie started to cry again. "Donna why…?"
"Jackie, well if makes you feel better, Third times the charm." Donna questions. Jackie laughs a little. "Well here comes the old high school days back. What a joy that was." Donna said whipping her tears with a Kleenex. "Personally Jackie, Hyde's not worth crying over. So cheer up. Hey! Let's go to the beach because there are a lot of cute guys out there." She says in a melody.
"I guess your right Donna. You always have been… Except, for befriending that evil stripper bitch. God I hate her!" Jackie sneered angrily.
"Ok Jackie! Lets just go to the beach it's a nice day." Donna drags her friend to the beach and of course she suddenly cheers up seeing all of the cute guys.
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Hyde is at Grooves for his morning shift. Charles and Fez come running in excited.
"Hyde! Man. Look at what we have. Airplane tickets to California and to Huntington Beach. Dude this is a great way to get your mind of Jackie."
"Hey my mind was never on Jackie until now. Thanks. You just made me realize what a major bitch she was." Hyde said with passion and anger. Charles and fez both took a step back. They were scared.
"Hyde man, common it's the beach. We will get to see those white legs of yours!" Charles and Fez both laughed.
"Oww!" Charles rubbed his arm. Hyde punched him. "Please Hyde we don't want to go find someone to replace you with." Charles begged.
"Okay fine man. It should be fun I mean the beach and all." Hyde said with a half smile.
"That's what I like to hear." Charles friendly patted his shoulder.
"Yea Hyde remember Eric and Donna live there." Fez added.
"Yea I can't wait to see if Forman still wears the pants in the relationship or if we will even recognize him as one of the guys." Fez and Hyde laughed. Charles just smiled he didn't know Eric.
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Jackie is sitting on her towel getting a tan. Every once in a while, she to a gaze at Eric and Donna playing in the sand. She wanted what they had and she was jealous of her and it made her cry through her sunglasses.
"Hey. " a guy said to her. "So uh… whats your name?" he asked
"Jackie." She said as she took her sunglasses off.
"Wow. You're really hot." He said with a grin.
She smiled "Not to shabby yourself there cowboy." She flirted with him a couple of hours.
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"Hey so… my friends and I are throwing this college party would you like to come. Its going to snazzy." He said rubbing her arm. Jackie was to memorized she found a guy to tell him to stop.
"Uhh… sure. Can my friend Donna come?" she asked.
"Of course." He smiled. She couldn't help but giggle.
"Hey I've got to get going, but here's the address and by the way my name is Andrew." He shook her hand. He started to walks away.
"Hey wait." Jackie got up and ran towards him.
He turned around. "Yea?" He smiled.
"Where are you going?" she asked him.
"I'm up for anything really." He told her.
"Uhm… ok so…" She started talking as they walked down the beach. Little did Jackie know Donna saw her the whole time.
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6 hours later at the airport: Fez, Charles and Hyde get off.
"What do you mean you lost my luggage!?!?" Furious the guy calls security. "No don't call the security. Just call this number when you get it." Hyde hands them Eric and Donna's number. They head out for Eric's house.
"Dude Hyde I'm sorry, but this is just so funny." Charles snickered to his best friend.
"Yes. I'm surprised they didn't lose my luggage." Fez laughs at himself.
"Lets just go. I'm trying to have a good time." Hyde said grinning.
"Wow. Fez?"
"Yes?"
"That's the first time I've seen Hyde smile in… ages." Charles remarked to fez. Quiet enough so Hyde couldn't hear them. They got a cab and made there way towards Eric's place.
"So I hear it's on a beach. How the hell did Eric afford that?" Fez says to make conversation.
"Well I was thinking you know maybe he robbed a bank, but I mean its Eric so it's anyone's guess." Hyde answered crackling.
"So, what's the deal with this guy is he like a transvestite or something?" Charles said confused.
"Maybe he is we haven't bothered to check. If you know what I mean." Hyde said. They laugh. Then fez ruins it.
"Oh don't worry he's not." Fez starts laughing while the other stop. They just stare at him. Fez slowing stops laughing then clears his throat awkwardly. "I meant… uh… Candy?"
The cab stops and Fez flies out of it. "Oh common guys!!" he shouts as it drives away.
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Eric and Donna arrive back to there house.
"Wait, where's Jackie?" Eric asked looking around like an idiot.
"Eric? Are you really that oblivious?" Donna laughs then Eric joins in.
"I don't know maybe I can be oblivious upstairs."
"Eww! Eric, not now because… well, I'm worried about Jackie." Donna saddened
"Why are you worried about a demon child?" Eric asked grinning.
"I know I'm never really worried about her, but she's with that guy Andrew. Remember from the parties we go too sometimes."
"Oh, no! That's not good. He's the Darth Vader of the now and well even the devil doesn't deserve that." Eric says seriously.
"No star wars! What did you promise?" Donna argued.
"No star wars. I got it." Eric said with an attitude. "if she gets in trouble she will call I bet."
"Yea probably." Donna grinned. (Door bell rang). "Your turn baby cakes." She kissed him and went to the kitchen.
"Yea yea." He walked over and looked through the peep hole and found Charles there standing. He decided to open it. "Umm… hello. Do I know you?" Eric raised and eye brow and smiled at the young man.
"Hello I'm Charles and I brought you a present." He grabs Hyde's shirt and tells him to get out. They argued with Eric standing there scared a little. Finally Hyde obeys and walks out from behind the bush.
"Hey, Forman. Long time no see." Hyde grins and punches Eric's arm. He rubs it and raises a lip.
"What are you two doing here?" Eric said confused.
"Didn't Fez call?" Hyde asked.
"No"
"What we told him to call." Charles said and Hyde argued with him over nothing. Then Eric interrupted.
"What are you guys doing here?" He questioned once again.
"Well, we can't afford a hotel so we need to stay here." Charles told Eric and Hyde turned and walked a little bit. Then a figure jumped out of the bushes and Hyde began to laugh hard.
"it is no funny. I am angry. I step in dog poo." Fez cried to Hyde.
"Dude you smell like shit man. That's what you get Fez. Better watch what your Foreign head says next time." Hyde remarked. Then let out another chuckle.
Donna comes over "Eric whos he…" she looks and sees Hyde then Fez wet covered with dog poop. "Wow! Hyde and.." she laughs "Do I even want to know?" she says to Hyde.
"Maybe... I know Forman will." He replied. Donna hugged him. "Sorry Fez no hug lookin' like that, but your welcome to take a shower?"
"Yes that would be nice, yes." He smiles and walks inside as do Charles and Hyde.
"Forman man this is nice. How did you afford this?" Hyde asked drooling over the house. He was jealous.
"Well I could tell you, then I'd have to kill you." Forman and Donna laugh while the rest stare at them like a dear in headlights.
"Excuse us for one second." Donna said, then pulled Eric away. "Eric do you think that they know Jackie's here?"
"Doubt it. they would be in a much worse mood." Eric answred totally serious. Donna gave him a gaze. "Donna i'm serious and well maybe we should take them to the party." Eric suggested.
"Yea it would be fun for all of us and plus we can watch over Andrew." Donna said kind of excitedly and nodded a lot. They walked back out to there guest. "theres a party down a couple of blocks and we should go and get caught up." they stared at her. "c'mon it'll be fun." they nodded and shrugged and followed her out the door.
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This story is not copywritted and well if you would like to re-write it i dont really mind. Im not a very good writer. I have habits of just getting to the end with no middle. Not really sure why. i think of a beginning and ending, but the middle is just nothing. lol well not re-write it more like take the plot and the idea of it. yea im tired good night! :) R&R pleasieeee.