Thanks for all the reviews! 5. 35 people read Chap. 1! AWESOME! If I can get 7 reviews then I will post tomorrow. BTW, MaXiMuMrIdEfAnAtIc won the competition. It was Nudge! She always says that she is hungry! Here's the chappie!
CHAPTER 2 Fang POV
I woke up to the sound
of Max's heavy breathing. Oh, god was she beautiful. She was so
peaceful when she sleeps. Which only adds to the fact I love her.
But, obviously, she only loves me like a brother.
"Fang?" she
said in her sleep, a bit nervously I might add.
"I'm right here Max. Don't worry." I answered. She smiled and woke up a few minutes later when Nudge came in. I pretended that I was asleep.
"Max, I'm hungry." A few minutes later Nudge said Max again. This time Max responded, "Yeah, Nudge?"
"I'm hungry."
"OK. We can go to the lobby in a few minutes. They have a free Continental Breakfast here."
"OK Max." she said and left.
"Max?" I asked. She literally jumped 10 ft. in the air.
"Don't do that Fang!" I could tell she was trying to make me scared of her. Too bad that I'm Max-glare-and-word-resistant. I laughed at the thought.
"What?" Max questioned me. I got lost in her perfect brown eyes, so I said the first thing that came to my mind.
"I'll take the kids down to eat; you can stay here and take a shower of something. We'll meet you down there."
"Uh, thanks?" she said, although it sounded more like a question than an answer.
She got her clothes and went to the bathroom. I changed and went to meet the kids and Total. We left Akila at Max's Mom's house, Dr. Martinez I think.
"Come on you guys, let's get some food. Max is taking a shower and will meet us down
there." At the mention of 'food', 4 bird kids and a Scottie type dog were at the door with
me, wide-eyed and tails waging. At least Total's tail was waging, but I swear, if we were
part dog too, their tails would have fallen off by now. I heard Angel giggle at my thought.
We went down the elevator, and I swear, if I was in there 1 more second, I would've
gone ballistic. I jumped out and went to grab a table that was big enough for everyone to
sit in. We loaded the table with food and Max came down, her hair still slightly damp.
We finished in 15 minutes. We went back to our rooms to pack up. When we were
checking out the stupid gut at the counter started to flirt with Max. And she actually
smiled at him! She gave him, a puny non-mutant human, who I could beat up in 5
seconds a smile. UNBELIEVEABLE! Oh, no, did my jaw just twitch? At least Max
didn't see it. We finished checking out, found an alley, and took off. I swear, Max is the
most graceful mutant on Earth. Oh, how I love her.
Well, how was it? DON'TFORGET MY POLL! I want 7 reviews to be able to update
tomorrow.
Noodle
