Here is the next chapter.
Chap. 3 part 2
This was what, the third time he kissed me? Why had I run away before? Oh, yeah, because I didn't know if I loved him. At least now I know I love him. With those thoughts, I became lost in the kiss. I only broke apart when I was about to faint for lack of oxygen.
"Aw, I'm sworry! Are we intwerupting somesing?" a voice from the front of the cave called out. I immediately jumped up into my fighting stance and took a look at our threats. They looked part human and part cheetah, like leopard woman back at the Germany Itex. It looked like they could morph like the Erasers. They had long claws that extracted out of their fingers, their hair jet black when they morphed, and like, you guessed it, models in their human form. The only flaw was their eyes. They stayed the same in their human form as well as their morphed form.
"Why yes you are." I replied. "So you might want to leave before we kick your butts from here to China!" They all winced at that, except the one that had talked. I guess she was the leader of the 5.
"Thanks for the offer, but I think we'll stay." She said.
"Ok, but don't say I didn't warn you!" Just as I finished saying that she leapt forward, scratching the side of my face. That was when I boiled over.
Chap. 4 part 1 (AN: Aren't I nice??)
All of what I had cried about earlier and even some more things were turned into anger. Couldn't they leave me alone for 1 minute? For the 1 minute I felt like a normal 14 year old girl? No. Of course not. Of course they couldn't leave me alone because I 'am supposed to save the world'! Screw the world! The world is what made me a mutant! I was sooooo angry, scratch that, I WAS FURIOUS! I screamed with rage and it knocked out one of the Cheetah Erasers. I saw fire erupt from my hands, rocks came pouring down around the Cheetahs, while vines that came out of no where twisted themselves around the things. Lightning struck one of the Erasers and she fell out of the cave, to become a pancake on the ground. A tornado came out on no where like the vines and threw the remaining Cheetahs far, far away. As I started to cool down, the fire did too, the lightning and rain I hadn't noticed became a gray cloud here or there. The vines went into cracks in the rocks and the tornado became a slight breeze. I turned to Fang, his face holding more emotion than I had ever seen before; Love, admiration, and astonishment towards me, and hatred toward the Eraser things. My face probably looked the exact same way. He was the first to find his voice.
"How did you do that?"
"I-I have no idea." I replied.
Thanks to everyone that reviewed! I got 2 extra, so I want 5 reviews this time. I am trying to find the # of reviews that people will think is ok and not too much. Do you like her new powers? What should I call the new Erasers? What will Fang's new power be? Why am I asking so many Questions? Can you please review??
Noodle The next chap will be posted when I get 5 reviews, like I said before.