To start off with I am REALLY sorry that I haven't updated sooner. Really, I'm sorry. Hajile bread reviewed on the 15th, but I jut haven't had time to update since then until now. I'm going to type up as many chapters as possible during this week (its spring break here) but my mom's really set on cleaning the house and my dad has to use the computer a lot more for his work. With all that put into play, I barely get enough time on the computer. This story will end soon, but I will have a sequel up sometime in the summer. It'll have a lot more plot than this. Ok, so I think that this author's note has been long enough, so without further ado I give you chapter 16.

Last time on MR5: MOTRA:

"And how is that, Max, oh girly one?" he shot back at me. Even though my blood started to boil and my hair started to light, I had enough control of my powers to respond, and I truly would've, it's just that--- Che-rasers came pouring through the windows and doorways. Everyone in the flock, yes, even Total, burst into action, just like I had taught them. I went into full out combat mode, using my newly-found powers as an advantage. After I started to singe Nudge's hair because I missed my target, I stopped using them. As I kept battling, though, it seemed like the Che-rasers were moving slower and slower. The answer to that mini-mystery came when I was finishing a round-house kick and caught sight of Fang. He had his eyes closed, muttering words under his breath. He was trying to freeze the Che-rasers in time while the flock escaped. Angel was in front of him, using mind control to keep the cat things away from him. Nudge was beside her, attacking the few that she missed. I quickly hatched a plan that I hoped would help us escape. I fought my way towards Iggy and with a punch here or there was right in front of him. His eyes were closed and yet he was still beating the Che-rasers even though he can now see.

"Igs!" I shouted over the noise of the fight. He heard my shout and turned towards me.

"What Max? Can't you see I'm a bit busy?" He spit back at me. "Who cares?! Just make me angry!" I told him my plan soft enough that the Che-rasers couldn't hear us, but loud enough so he could hear me. When I finished, he broke into a mischievous smile. "NOW!" I yelled, putting my plan into motion. Iggy finished the Che-raser he was fighting, turned around and kissed me! On the *bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep* mouth! I backed away from him as fast as I could, feeling a rush of anger and adrenaline. That's really all I remember before I lost control of my body. When I came back to my senses, I saw every single Che-raser on the floor, having been electrocuted, burned, or just knocked out it looked like. My flock looked…Wait…Where was my flock? As I started to panic a little voice in my head called Angel and her power said, "Max! Hurry! We're out in the parking lot! I'll explain when you get out here but Iggy's getting beat up by Fang! Come quick!"

I rushed out to the parking lot as soon as she said they were out there, and by the time she was done I was witnessing the fight with my own eyes. Iggy was on the asphalt, bloody and bruised, with a perfect looking Fang on top of him beating his lights out. I ran over there and broke up the fight, having to hold Fang back from Iggy while he ran away. Fang had pure hatred in his eyes that he usually reserved for Ari and Jeb. I turned him in front of my so he looked down into my eyes. When he saw me the emotion changed to confusion and hurt, so much hurt. It pained me so much to look into them that I had to look away.

"Why, Max? Why?" he asked me, his voice barely a whisper. I looked him in the eyes, took a deep breath, and started to explain my whole plan to him.

"The reason Iggy kissed me was because I told him to. I can't control my powers fully yet, and you know that. I can only use them when I get really angry. I fought my way over to Iggy in the middle of the battle and told him to make me angry, but I didn't tell him how. That way I would be even angrier. And by the way, thank you for slowing down the Che-rasers. It really helped." As I was explaining, Fang visibly relaxed. After I was done explaining I walked over to Iggy and punched him.

"Ow! What was that for Max?" he asked.

"Of all of the things you could've chosen, I can't believe that you kissed me! You sexist pig!" With that I stalked away from him and yelled out report. My responses were the usual: "Ok," "Fine," "Only a few scratches here or there-" "Perfect," and a nod of the head. I did a quick check over of myself, only to find that both of my heels were broken, the halter now had fringe at the bottom, and that the mini-skirt was now a super mini-skirt, all of which just wanted to make me change even more. A glance at Fang made me think that he felt the exact same way. His shirt was now a one sided tank top with big slashes and some cuts here or there. His pants, boy, were they something to laugh over. They now looked like cheer leader shorts. You know the tiny ones? As I met his eyes and began to laugh, it seemed like he froze time, just not me. I just kept laughing my sorry little a-butt off while Fang stared at me with a confused expression, and believe me, that fueled my laughter even more. As I finally calmed myself down enough for him to be heard over the laughing, he started to talk.

"Why are you not frozen? I was trying to freeze you too." Now that got me to stop laughing.

So my readers, how many of you liked it? How many of you hated it? How many of you don't care about this story? I really don't know because I'm not a mind reader-

Angel: But I am!

Yes Angel, you are! I just remembered that! Will you please tell me what the readers think?
Angel: Nope! Max says it isn't good to read stranger's minds.
Me: Darn Max!

Max: WHAT ABOUT ME???????

Me: NOTHING! (Runs away screaming like the girl she is)

(REVIEW PLEASE! I won't update until I get the time AND 15 reviews, including Hajile bread.)