Jinchuuriki's Redemption
Hey all! This is Ryan signing in today with another chapter of Jinchuuriki's Redemption!!
As an apology for my lateness in giving you guys a satisfying update, here's the little bit that I was able to come up with since I got home from the hospital. I'll do my best to give you guys some better material in the future...
Just so everyone knows, there is a poll on my bio right now that could change the entire course of the story! That's right, you get to choose who Yugito leaves Konoha with!
The Choices Are:
Kakashi
Jiraiya
Asuma
Hayate
Itachi
Keep in mind that this might turn into a romantic interest...
Also, I apologize for the massive lag between updates, life caught up with me, and I was a little confused as to how I'm going to make this story flow...
Lastly, I can't update til' I have at least 10 people give me their opinions, either in reviews or answer to the poll on my profile, so I apologize for the inherent shortness of this chapter.
Demon talking/thinking- Raaaawr!!
People talking- "Ramen"
People thinking- 'Believe it!!'
Justus- Kanishibari no Justu
And yes, I realize that this is necessary, so here goes... I do not, and never will, own Naruto or any affiliated characters!! (Except for OC's, and original justu names)
I believe that I haven't given Jiraiya a chance to do an intro yet...
Jiraiya (Big Breath) -
...On second thought, I'll spare the kiddies out there any mentally scarring images he may present, and start the story
"Damn you, Ryan!!!" - Who else?
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-------- Old Friends, New Enemies--------
As Yugito walked slowly towards the Intense Mental Trauma Ward, she couldn't help but reflect on how badly her nephew had been treated. Goddamit, the poor kid is so scared, he shied away from me before I could get a chance to say anything meaningful... Just what has his life been like, and where have all of his parent's "friends" been through all of this?
She had hardly finished her mental rant when she bumped into a familiar face...
Two identical voices screamed in unison, "YOU!!!"
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Yeah, pathetic, isn't it? I'll do what I can to make up for this travesty in the coming days, and I promise a chapter of at least 5000 words before I'm done!
