Thank you to my few reviewers (hint) maybe some suggestions next time?
(This time I'm starting off on the last day of school)
The bell rang signaling the end of the last day of school.
"Sam!" called Jen, coming over to where Sam stood, trying to open her locker for the last time.
"Brat!" yelled Jake, walking over to stand beside Jen next to Sam's locker.
"Darlin'." Said Darrell walking casually over to stand next to Sam.
"Jake!" yelled one of jakes brothers, Quinn.
"WHAT?" Sam and Jake said loudly.
"Just saying that Jen and I are coming over around seven tonight." Said Darrell.
"Ok," said Sam "you don't have to though."
"You'd rater be alone with Jake you mean?" Darrell said grinning.
Sam stared in horror, "no way you can come over anytime."
"That's what I thought." Said Jen, smiling.
"Well, now that we are all sorted out, Jake come on, we have to go home, Sam, you come too, the truck might be kind of cramped because my friend Jason is coming to my place for a while, so you can sit on Jake's lap." Said Quinn, happily.
"Ok, see you later guys." Sam said to Darrell and Jen.
The Ely's crowded into the blue pickup truck and Sam saw that there was in fact only one place to sit, and that was on someone's lap.
"Sam you sit on Jake's lap." Said Quinn, "I'll take you're backpack."
Sam climbed into the car and sat down quickly. Jake closed the door behind her.
Sam didn't really know where to put her back so she just leaned against Jake's chest.
It was hard.
Jake didn't really know where to put his hands so he put them around her waist.
Sam tensed up the minute he did this. He dropped his hands and she relaxed.
"Its ok." She said. And he put his hands back.
Jason and the few other Ely brothers watched this smirking. (a.n. I know, most of the Ely's have graduated by now, lets just pretend, shall we? In the books Quinn is still in school though.)
"What?" Sam said.
"Nothing," said Quinn, turning the car on. "All set?" he took off at 40 miles an hour, sending Sam back into Jakes chest with a thud.
At river bend…
"Jake I'm going for a ride, bye." Sam said. She looked at her watch and saw it was 3:45. She had done all her barn chores and was planning on looking for the phantom.
Half and hour later she found him.
He was with his herd drinking from the La Charla (a.n. spelling?) about 2 miles away.
She got off Ace and waited. After 5 minutes he came up behind her and rested his soft, velvet head on her shoulder.
"Zanzibar." Sam whispered, turning and slowly reaching her shaking hand to his mane.
He lowered his head to her waist level, and she gradually hoisted herself onto his strong, white back.
Then they were flying.
He took off at a full gallop, not out of fear, but excitement. Sam laughed along with his neigh and he eventually slowed down miles away from where Sam had left Ace and the herd.
Suddenly Zanzibar lifted his head quickly. Sam looked in the direction he was facing. She saw a horse and rider 1000 feet away.
"Aw, shoot, he always has to show up at the worst times, doesn't he?" Sam muttered, sliding of the stallion's back. The phantom galloped off after Jake loped up to her, fuming.
"What?" said Sam casually.
"Do you have any idea? I found that horse of yours returned to the ranch and you are out here riding that crazy…do you have any idea, I was so worrie-" he said. "whatever. Just come on." He offered her his hand and she got on witch's back behind him.
Sorry, it was kind of short. Please review and give me tips and your ideas and ill give you credit for them!!!
Thanks.