Yes I finished it this chapter took forever

Takua:could it be anything to do with the fact that your lazy?

I am NOT lazy! now if you'll excuse me Takua has a date with the chainsaw


The sun beamed down on the barren landscape that was Po-Wahi as the Toa of ice walked towards the gates of Po-koro he knew that there was little chance of Pohatu actually being in his village but it was a good place to start. Walking to the gates Kopaka noticed something, on the path he was walking on there were strange marks, they almost looked like footprints, he decided it was probably nothing and carried on. As Kopaka entered the village the Po-matoran stared at him and whispered, he hardly, if ever, visited this village and so the matoran were scared by his presence but it felt as if there was something else another reason for them to be scared.

Kopaka stepped into Onewa's hut it was dimly lit and full of old trinkets of Onewa's past. "Ah Kopaka, Toa of ice what brings you here on this fine day" asked Onewa stepping into the light

"Turaga I need to talk to Pohatu, do you know where he is?" asked Kopaka who knew the answer even before he said the question "No I don't know where Toa Pohatu is, he could be miles from here" He answered sadly obviously it had been a while since Pohatu had been to his village and his Turaga was starting to get worried, Kopaka needed to find Pohatu no matter "Well I need to find him so if comes here tell him Kopaka was looking for him" said Kopaka

"Yes Toa, oh while you are out could you keep an eye out for a matoran" said Onewa sighing Kopaka turned around "A matoran, what happened?" he asked

"Well a few days ago in the middle of the night one of our matoran was... taken" said Onewa

"Taken? By what?" asked Kopaka who was confused

"We don't know it was in the night all we know is that it was no Rahi"

"How do you know it wasn't a Rahi?" asked Kopaka out of curiosity

"Follow me I'll show you what I mean" said Onewa as he left his hut followed by Kopaka. They walked down through the village being watched by the matoran every step of the way.

When they reached the hut a Kopaka saw a strange sight, the outside of the hut was completely untouched but as he entered the inside there was evidence of a struggle, but Kopaka didn't know why it was strange then it hit him, Rahi can't open doors.

As he examined the hut he could see any scratch marks but a table had been knocked over and the bed was in a strange position. "Come over here" said Onewa, Kopaka went over to him and saw what Onewa was looking at, in the corner of the room there was an odd mark on the wall it was a frozen liquid but it was too misty to be water "That brings back memories" he said pointing at the liquid "But it scares me to think how it got here" Kopaka touched the liquid even though his senses had told him not to, the liquid was cold and when he touched it his mind was flooded with memories of his transformation into Toa nuva he suddenly realised what the liquid was, it was frozen Protodermis.

Kopaka was confused how did this get to Po-Koro? He asked himself he turned to the wise Turaga "What was the name of the matoran?" asked Kopaka he knew it probably didn't matter but he had to know

Onewa sighed deeply "It was Hewki" Kopaka had heard of Hewki he was one of the best Kohli players in Mata-Nui and had beat Kopaka's Kohli team more than once. "Pohatu is out looking for Hewki isn't he?" Kopaka asked he knew that Pohatu would be, after all it was his duty "Yes that is what Pohatu is doing" Onewa replied, Kopaka picked up a hint of sadness in his voice "Your worried about Pohatu because he hasn't returned yet" said Kopaka

"Unfortunately you are right" said Onewa sighing deeply and so they both walked out of the hut Kopaka knew that he would have to find Pohatu and that his sister had probably already found her brothers and was heading to the Kini. "Turaga I will find Pohatu because that is my duty now" said Kopaka he said his goodbyes to the Turaga and set off to find Pohatu and Hewki.

Kopaka walked through the heat of the desert he was hot too hot and had no idea of where to start looking for Pohatu or Hewki. But then to his surprise he tripped which had never happened to him before and was probably because of the heat but what he tripped up over was the answer to his questions when he looked at the strange mark he had tripped over he saw that there were more of them he realised what they were, they were footprints. Kopaka decided that if he followed them he might find Pohatu or maybe the matoran so he got off of the dirt and followed the trail of footprints hopefully at the end he would find Pohatu and Hewki.

Kopaka dropped to his knees he was exhausted, normally he'd be able to walk twice the distance that he had today but the heat was sapping his energy he could barely walk. He had to keep going he was determined not to die here his legs were stiff but he pushed himself up and carried on. Every step was painful his legs were like rocks moving them took a great deal of strength, which he didn't have, but he had to keep going if he fell down now he would never get up again. Kopaka then noticed something, about two metres ahead of him the footprints he had been following stopped out in the middle of nowhere he walked up to where they stopped there was nothing for miles Kopaka's only clue had failed he collapsed unable to carry on he was lost with no idea where to go and with no strength. Suddenly the ground he was laid on crumbled around him, he was unable to escape, he fell he was surrounded by darkness as the light disappeared he became unconscious he felt his life leaving him but he didn't die because one word kept his soul from escaping Gali.


hope you liked it part 2 is coming soon now where was I grabs chainsaw