Hello everyone just a quick update semi related to this story. I won't be posting anything new on this story but I am currently attempting a rewrite using the advice I've received via this story's reviews. It has also been a few years since I wrote anything to post online but I have been reading lots and I feel I have a better grasp of what works and what does not.
I am really focusing on the pacing of the new version as looking back this one seems very rushed start to finish. I do not plan on deleting this story as it serves as a good reminder as to where i started and there will be enough differences between the two stories that both might be worth a read. I am hoping the new one is much better though so if you enjoyed this one at all please feel free to check out the rewrite.
The new story will have the simple title of Forks meets Percy Jackson rewrite.