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End of Chapter 6
"Yes, that's correct…And Amy, um, this may seem really awkward, but we are going to have to kiss…again".
Her eyes went wide. Kiss? Again? No! She didn't want to fall for him again…not after what happened. He wouldn't leave her, but after the five days finished, she would just be alone again after her this.
"What? NO! We can't! W-Why do we have t-to? I can't kiss you!"
Ian looked a little hurt at her revulsion. It wasn't that kissing him disgusted her; she just didn't want to get hurt again.
"Sorry, but Natalie is extremely hard to fool, and she thinks I'll have to be faking, but if I kissed you, she would have to believe it!"
In truth, Amy was a little worried about what would happen…she kissed Ian before, but not really, just a brush of the lips…what would it be like now?
Chapter 7
AMY
Both Ian and Amy walked up to the door. Amy grabbed the doorknob as Ian did too. She blushed and pulled her hand back quickly. "What's the matter, love?" Ian said, staring her in the eyes.
"I told you. Don't. C-call. Me. Lo"…Amy never finished her sentence because Natalie opened the door.
"Hey, brother", she said to Ian. Then she saw Amy.
"Amy…Cahill? What is she doing here? Why, Ian? Why'd you bring her here?
"Well, duh to annoy you, you think I actually wanted her to come here".
Natalie nodded at this and left the doorstep, where they were standing. s
Amy's eyes filled with tears that she blinked back again. She knew this would happen. He would just use her, pretend to like her, and in the end leave her. Well, it wasn't his fault; he told her this was a fake relationship. What did she expect? Actual caring. The tears were starting to fall so she just blinked harshly and turned to face Ian. He stared at her, surprised that her eyes were wet.
"What's wrong, love?"
Amy's heart broke again.
"What's wrong…what's wrong love? Ian, I told you…don't call me love…one minute, you try to k-kiss me…the next minute, you say you don't care for me? What's wrong with you? You don't actually have to care. I-I don't expect kindness from you, but don't j-just g-get my hopes up and then be harsh again. Please. It just is too much".
With this, Amy grabbed her suitcase and started walking back to the car.
Ian groaned. He just said that to ward off Natalie. "Come on love, slow down. I wasn't serious. I wanted to get Natalie to stop asking questions".
Amy ignored him so he started running after her. She ran across the grass and down the road, where there was a pay phone. She would just call her brother.
"Amy!"
Ian finally caught up to Amy and held her shoulders with his strong hands.
He tried to look into her eyes, but she just looked down, embarrassed at her outburst.
He continued to stand there and wait, so Amy just turned around, trying to pull away from him, and finally did.
By this time, it was afternoon already, about 2:00. There was a lot of snow on the ground, just waiting for someone to trip. And someone did. Amy, because she pulled too hard, tripped and fell on the floor, skidding on the ice. "Ow", she yelped.
"No way", Ian said, laughing at her. "I'm not falling for your tricks again". He turned to walk away. "I'm trying to be nice, but you're just being like Dan".
Amy started whimpering quietly and Ian turned around, frowning. "Why are you still on the ground?" He then saw her face and his eyes widened. He bent down quickly and took her shoe off.
She groaned again clutching at her ankle and he began examining it and sighed in relief.
"Don't worry…it's just sprained slightly…it'll be better by tomorrow morning"
"W-well what about now", she glared.
"Let's see if you can walk", Ian replied, reaching out his hand. She pushed it away.
"I can do this on my own". She stood unsteadily and walked two steps, before she cried out in pain, falling back down into Ian's arms.
"Really, Amy? You can?" Ian asked, chuckling. "You won't be able to walk". Then he started smirking. "Ok. I guess I'm going to have to carry you".
"N-no way", Amy said, a nervous look creeping onto her face.
"Too bad. Do you want to stay out all day?"
Amy looked like she was debating. She frowned while she was thinking. Ian sighed and bent down to pick her up.
"N-NO, Ian…I don't need you to help me".
"Too bad, love…I'm carrying you anyway". With an easy hoist, he lifted her up into his arms, bridal style".
Amy was bright red by this time and was trying not to get comfortable, but Ian's arms were just so sturdy and strong. In a couple of minutes, they reached the house again…
Ian looked down and smiled softly. Amy was fast asleep in his arms.
