I know most of you didn't enjoy that last chapter. But I promise, It's for a good reason. Their an interesting plot twist that I think you are going to enjoy…
"What?" Mary asked Joey, not quite sure what he was saying.
Mary closed her eyes. The music stopped playing and everyone was silent.
Then Mary heard Joey say to open her eyes, when she did she was shocked.
Joey was down on one knee and in on hand he held a diamond ring
"Do I even have to ask?" he said with a smile.
"Yes!" Mary said hitting him with a hug so hard she practically tackled him. Then the whole restaurant awed.
After Mary and Joey were done hugging, The owner walk over to them. "Congratulations!" he said shaking Joey's hand. "Come with me to my office for some complimentary champagne."
Mary and Joey followed him through the kitchen, down a long hallway, and into his office; holding hands the whole way.
The owner was an old man, and in the dim light of his office, it really showed.
"Oh dang nab it!" the owner exclaimed, pushing his glasses up on his nose. "I forgot! We keep the champagne in the cellar!" The he turned and looked at Joey. "Would you mind coming with me, young man? The cellar door his heavy and hard for me to open." "Okay." Joey answered the young man.
"You can stay her Miss. He'll only be gone a minute." The man said to Mary.
Mary nodded and sat down on the dark green sofa the owner had in his office.
Joey and the old man walked into the kitchen, where a waiter asked where they were going.
"To the cellar." The owner replied. "To get some champagne for the happy couple."
"Umm… Mr. Thomas… we don't use the cellar any more. We stopped that a few months ago, remember?" "Oh…' was all Mr. Thomas said.
"Here is a bottle of Champagne though." the waiter said handing the bottle and two glasses to Joey.
"You go drink it with your fiancée. I have to go do something." Mr. Thomas said walking away.
Joey walked back to the office.
Once he was inside he placed the bottle and glasses on Mr. Thomas' desk.
"Mary?" Joey said, seeing she was not sitting on the couch.
He turned around and felt the pain in his heart again. It was the same pain that had been there the day she was shot.
His brain went numb. He could think. And he could barley see.
And what he did see was what was causing him all this misery.
In a dark corner of the room, Mary was standing, looking terrified, tears spilling over.
The man was back.
And he had one hand over Mary's mouth.
The other held his gun.
Which he had pressed against the side of her head.
There is your plot twist (But it's not the last one hehe)
Do you like it?
Hate it?Think it is to boring and all been done before?
Thank you for mudding through the last chapter, and the beginning of this one (I know they are not my best)