"Wow…" Tenten commented on Hinata's story.

"I didn't know that you can tell stories like these! You're cool man! Dattebayo!" Naruto shouted.

All of them agreed with Naruto.

They did not know that Hinata was not 'innocent after all.

"Un. Anyway, whose next?" Kiba stated.

The rest of the gang looked at each other before Naruto shouted at kiba, "What was that? Are you trying to get someone else to articulate their story to us and you can just skip a turn? Why don't you just admit that you were scared by Hinata's story and want to pull out? I'm not asking you to buy me some ramen or what, scary-cat!"

And with that, Kiba exploded.

"What? You call me a chicken? I'll show you that I'm not one by telling you a ghost story that will surely freak you all out. This is even better than yours and Hinata's! (Hint, hint)."

"Oh yeah, then prove it!"

"Fine!"

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One of my friends managed to secure a renovated colonial resort, it those sort of corporate owned mansion actually. Humongous, looks damn old on the outside but the interior was top notch. It had a very nice view, out of the balcony you actually can see a Beach. But other than that the surrounding was very dark and deserted.

It's near to the holiday resorts .In fact they were in the same area.

So we guys decided to stay for a full week ourselves, the adults left after the 4th day because they grew bored of cards and TV, and being the adventurous pre-teens we were, we decided to explore the surrounding areas.

There was this much larger and dilapidated mansion on top of a hill beside our place.

We climbed the worn-out tarmac driveway that led to the house. As we climbed, one of my female friends (let's call her C for now) kept insisting that we turned back cause she's not feeling that good. So being MACHO guys, we mocked her and insisted she came along.

So we reached the house entrance.

It was at least 2 times the size of our mansion, easily 3/4 of a football field. The windows and doors were bolted up with planks (typical haunted house material, I know) and they were falling off due to old age( imagine how old that house was) .

For some heavy wood planks to disintegrate by a soft nudge.

We made our way into the house. Smelt musty, like your long-forgotten closet. Other then that the house was practically undisturbed compared to others popular haunted spots. No graffiti, no condoms, no candles and stuff. We explored the entire lobby, yes a lobby. That place is THAT big. We dare not climb the grand staircase in the middle because it was falling apart.

Then I found this table with some objects lying on top right underneath the stairs. Some form of altar.

I recognize any of the figurines on the altar. So I asked my friend to shine his torch at my direction. What I saw made me almost scream man. The 3 figurines were porcelain toys. Like those cutesy little gals. Then we were thinking like WTF?. This is getting wrong. What the toys doing in a place like this.

Then suddenly C screamed.

Bewildered, we asked her what's wrong. She just closed her eyes and kept saying "I wanna get out of here" then this macho jumbo fella in my group asked her sternly what was wrong. She just shook her head frantically and just told us to get out.

And so we did. No doubt puzzled more than scared. Then back at the resort we asked her what she saw, she said that when I asked my friend to shine the torch at the altar, she saw some pale shadowy figure standing right behind the altar which was looking at me and the other guy in front of the altar. And that figure was only a bit taller that the altar. So technically a kid ghost I presume.

Then she tried to look elsewhere cause she was too scared, then she looked up on the 2nd floor staircase. Then she saw a few of those white figures, some big some small all looking down at us. That was when she screamed. Still managed to make me scared after all these years. Anyways the place we lived in is no longer there but that mansion on the hill is still there.

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End of chapter

Isn't it OMG? When I first heard this story, I was like so scared

And one of the reviews even said that the first few stories were scary (Sorry)!

I was like thinking,"Huh? I didn't even feel scared at all after reading them."

Well, review and tell me how you felt about this story and if I should continue writing this kind of scary story or just like the ones before this.

Thanks!