After The Dawn...
A Twilight Fan Fiction
AN: Okay this fanfic is set post breaking dawn, and I have written the first four chapters, but don't really have any idea where I'm going with it, so please review guys, and let me know what you think, I'd really appreciate it. I am also more than happy to take on any suggestions/idea's people have for the story :).
Okay first attempt at writing from someone else's POV other than Bella's so please let me know what you think, I alternated this chapter to two POV's as I just didn't feel the full chapter would work, from Bella's POV.
Also I have decided when writing from Bella's POV to shorten Renesmee's name to Ness, as Bella hated her being called Nessie and I don't ever see Bella having agreed to begin calling her that, and Renesmee seems to long a name to called all the time, it will still be Nessie though when the story is told from other people's POV...
Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight or any of its characters, that is copyright of Stephanie Meyer's. I own only the idea only, and any knew character's I should end up adding in.
Chapter Five.
Bella's POV
We decided it was time to get up and both quickly got dressed, knowing Renesmee would be up shortly. We were both in the kitchen, with me organising some porridge for Ness when she awoke, while Edward sat at the table pouring over some chords he'd scrawled down during the night for a new composition, he was composing a new song to play for Ness at her birthday party in just over a weeks time. At that moment Alice came bursting through the door. Alice didn't believe in knocking, as she knew her 'second sight' would pre-warn her if she was about to walk in on something she'd rather not see.
''Is she up yet ?'' she asked Edward and I.
''Yes, I think she is and I think you know where to find her'', I laughed.
This had become a daily ritual, each morning Alice coming over to the cottage to have a fashion parade with Renesmee. I must say it made me slightly relieved I was no longer Alice's guinea-pig barbie doll.
But I must say Renesmee had definitely inherited some of my traits. The moment she heard Alice coming, she would wake up, as if by an alarm clock, then would take off from her room, and hide under our bed, from Aunty Alice, until she was eventually bribed out to have yet another fashion show.
Alice had clearly now found Renesmee, and was beginning trying on outfits, just then Edward chuckled out loud.
''What is it?" I asked him intrigued.
'' Oh nothing just being nosey with Nessie's thoughts again'' he replied.
I glared at him other people calling our daughter Nessie, I had begun to get used too, but not Edward, it annoyed me so much, I tended to break whatever I held, so it was a good thing at this particular moment in time my hands were empty.
''why what's she thinking this time?'', I asked once I'd calmed myself down again.
''She's just showing Alice what she would like to wear, and mentally begging for no frilly dresses, which of course is exactly what Alice has planned'', he explained.
At that point we both said ''typical Alice'', and begun to laugh.
About five minutes later a fully dressed Renesmee, danced into the small living room of the cottage, and twirled round for us.
Of course Alice had picked out a ridiculously expensive pink satin sun dress, cover in bows and ribbon's. She had accessorised this outfit with some matching pink sandals and ankle socks, and a rather cute sun-hat, that Renesmee did not seem one bit impressed about wearing.
"Oh don't you look pretty princess'', Edward told Renesmee, while he picked her up and spun her around in a big circle.
For a surprising change instead of simply showing us our thoughts she spoke aloud ''I look ridiculous, how am I supposed to play with Claire and ride on Jake's back wearing this'', she complained. My daughter sure had a point, but Alice thought she looked cute and insisted it didn't matter if she ruined it, as she wouldn't be wearing it again. So I gave in, I must admit though, I felt rather sorry for Renesmee, but to be honest I was just glad Alice hadn't decided to play Girls World on me today.
At that moment, Renesmee jumped from her fathers arms at the sound of a wolf howling in the distance. She could pick out Jacob's howl from miles away, and she grabbed my hand and dragged me into the garden, to wait on him.
Jacob's POV
I phased back into my human self, by cover of the tree's, just before I approached the little cottage, hidden deep away in the forest.
Just as I got into view Renesmee danced across the space from the house to where I had just come into view, and flung herself into my outstretched arms. We now had this move perfectly synchronised. God she looked cute today I thought to myself, she sure suited pink.
Renesmee then touched my cheek, showing me us leaving. Just at that point Edward came into the garden, and put an arm around Bella, and said ''looks like someone's impatient to get to La Push''.
''Yes I get that feeling too'', I laughed.
But I said to Nessie, we should go inside and so that she could say goodbye to her parents, I was also doing this as I felt it would be rude not to go in and say hello. She reluctantly agreed, and Bella offered me some tea, so I thought it only polite to accept.
As we went into the cottage I found Alice was also here, at least it was her and not the psycho blonde leech, I thought to myself. So I politely greeted her, and asked her how life was treating her, not that I was ll that interested to be honest.
We chatted away, mostly me listening with Nessie curled up in my lap, and only answering when Bella gave me a chance to get a word in edgeways.
Boy, she'd become a chatterbox, since her transformation to vampire life, I thought to myself, Edward silently chuckled at this thought.
Eventually I left my half drank cup of tea, because Nessie was so desperate to leave, I must admit, no matter how much I loved Bella and Edward for giving me Nessie, I would just never get used to that smell, so was secretly glad she'd been so impatient to leave, so that we'd get into the fresh air faster.
Nessie said her goodbye to her mom and her dad, giving them their usual routine of about a million kisses and cuddles, and then gave a final big hug, to her aunty Alice.
Edward, called to us to have fun as we departed the cottage, and came to wave us off from the door with Bella.
Just before we got to the forest Bella shouted '' take care and no calling my daughter after any sea monsters Jake, I'm warning you''.
I just laughed in response, and took Renesmee's hand as we sprinted off into the forest together.
A/N okay guys so be brutally honest and let me know what you think? review please, as I intended to write the next chapter from Jacob's POV again, so please give me any suggestions you feel necessary, did I pull Jacob off okay, I worry that I made him sound too much different, in the way he spoke and thought from the way Stephanie did, but I tried my best, so this is why anything you feel I should or shouldn't be including when writing from Jake's POV would be very beneficial for the next chapter, which I intend to post tomorrow, if i get any reviews :), but if you think this story is totally dreadful, please feel free to also tell me, but constructively please, well for now guys, goodnight, and thankies for staying with me...x x