Sorry about the mix up, my computer screws over sometimes and labels things wrong. : / buts it is fixed, and here is a new chapter.


Eragon PoV

He knew it was dark, the squelching sounds under his feet made him jump when he thought it was dry. Brisingr tapped lightly against his leg, and the tugging in his mind grew stronger as his hands trailed along the dark walls. he led himself to what seemed like a dead end, but as he opened a were light, he saw at crawling level a niche in the rock. Slowly the sound of chanting filled his ears, and he realised that the people of Dras Leona where once again giving a sacrifice. He quickly crawled into the hole, eager to get away from the unearthly howling. Slowly it turned into a tunnel, and the further he went, the steeper it got. He crawled lower, and lower, until he was sure he was below the earth, and where the were light only gave little light for him to see.


Arya PoV

She looked around stunned. She could see no opening in the stone, the top or bottom was sheer and steep, but where was Eragon? She shook her, and began muttering words in the ancient language, but she was stopped as a whistling sound filled her ears. She turned around to glimpse a stone flying towards her head, before she could move it connect squarely with her head, and everything went black.


Back to Eragon.

The ground became so steep he slid forwards, and soon he was free falling a short distance. His heart beat wildly as the ground levelled out into a flat surface and he could stand straight. A soft gold light was ahead of him, and with reluctance he followed, unsure what to do. The tugging faded away as he placed a hand on the golden stone. And he found the voice again submerging his thoughts.

Push it open, it will obey.

The door slid forward silently, and he beyond it a soft white glow gave Eragon a view of a passage filled with water. The surface was glassy, but in the centre, a beacon of light was beginning to form. He slowly found himself at the edge of the lake, his eyes fixed on the sight before him. He saw a stone rise from the water, causing ripples to stir across the field of water. Soon a small figure appeared, but what he saw was not a child. It was a woman, the soft white gown she wore caressing her skin softly. Her hair bond back into a tight ponytail, and her hands beckoning him to come closer. He let his feet dip into the water slightly, and was startled to find a stone rise immediately from the surface. He walked on, towards the beautiful woman and the secrets she held.


Sorry about the wait, I have been posting on another site and it's been time consuming. Here's the chapter, and please review, I need to know if my writing is slumping.