Hello! Thank you so much for the reviews…but I only got 2 so far. COME ON MY GOAL IS MORE THAN TEN. THAT'S RIGHT DOUBLE DIGITS…I DREAM BIG :D….but seriously review and tell me what I need to improve. This isn't the best writing I've done, I'm sort of really rushing it. Sorry by the way :P
I'm not used to writing this style, like the all knowing narrator, usually do first person kind of thing, and I usually make up my own stories, not use a show….sorry for rambling.
:D please review, I love them. Almost as much as I love coffee (and I LOVE coffee…maybe as much as Lorelai does) *gasp* :D
*sorry, this chapter is sort of short...I'm just going with the flow i really dont know what im gunna do sometimes. i know certain parts that i wanna do, but to lead up to them...well i dont know how im going to so i usually just write what pops in my head...so sorry if its short and sounds bad-ish*
"Dad, this is Lorelai" Luke finally woke up from his day dream and walked out into the kitchen where William sat sipping coffee. Lorelai stood next to Luke smiling.
"Hello sir" She stuck her hand out for him to shake. Will looked at it then grinned and shook a very firm handshake.
"Well hello Lorelai, just call me Will or William which ever your little heart desires" He smiled at her. She giggled in response and nodded her head. "So Lorelai, you hungry? I attempted to make bacon and eggs. It taste like cardboard and plastic" He laughed.
Luke sighed and went over to the stove starting it up. "I'll make some more eggs, Is Liz joinging us for breakfast? Or will be another run through?"
"I don't know, I'll go ask" William started to stand.
"No, don't get up. I'll go ask her." Lorelai jumped up. "Where is her room?"
Will just smiled in response. "To your right once you pass the bathroom"
Lorelai smiled and followed his directions.
"She's pretty and nice" Will chuckled. "Don't let go of this one Luke"
"Dad" He moaned, "We aren't dating. I cant even call her my friend yet."
"You guys aren't friends but you slept with her, good job"
Luke sighed in frustration. And just gave up, he knew his father was messing with him, but a depressed thought crossed his mind. No one that sweet, funny and cute would ever like Luke Danes…
Lorelai shyly stuck her head inside of the decorated door. Flowers and swirls covered the door, making it obvious it's a girls room. "Liz?" she asked. The girl turned away from her mirror and smiled.
:And who are you?" She asked. Lorelai took a step inside and smiled.
"I'm Lorelai, I'm a friend of Lukes. He really saved me last night at the party and let me stay here" Liz grinned.
"Oh, you guys spent the night together. Interesting. So you and my brother have fun, if you know what I mean" She winked. Lorelai laughed throwing her head back.
"Oh no, no" She smiled. "I needed a place to crash that's all"
"Whatever" Liz grew bored of the situation quickly.
"Are you staying for breakfast?" Lorelai asked remembering her entire goal of coming into Liz's room.
"No, going to my boyfriends place then somewhere to hang with them." She replied fixing her curly hair and staring at herself in the mirror.
"Okay, see ya then" Lorelai left and slowly walked back into the kitchen to find Luke setting a big plate of eggs in the spot next to his father, obviously for Lorelai. "She's not eating here" She conformed and sat. Her stomach growled, she didn't realize how hungry she was until the aroma of the fresh, boiling hot eggs hit her nostrils. She started scoffing it down and couldn't help herself.
"Wow, do you eat at home?" William laughed.
Lorelai's face turned red and she grinned. "Yeah, sorry. I tend to eat a lot"
"You eat a lot? Really you look like you barley eat" Luke spoke up, grinning at the fact that her face was a bright red color.
"Well. Uh thanks?" She stuttered un sure if it was a compliment or insult. "So what's going on today?" She quickly changed the topic.
"I thought I'd take you home" Luke stated sitting next to her with his own plate of eggs and an orange slice.
"Oh common Luke, it's your day off of work, have fun. Take the pretty Lorelai out and do something with her. Show her around town." William quickly sighed before anybody could say anything else.
"Do you want to?" Luke asked turning to Lorelai. Her big bright blue eyes remained on him.
"Yeah, I'd like that" She grinned. Luke suddenly started turning a pink color and his glance quickly went down to his plate.
"Its settled then, you kids have fun and I'll go over to the store for the day." Will quickly stated then got up. "it was nice to meet you, I really hope we meet again" He smiled at Lorelai then walked out of the room.
"I like your family" Lorelai said as they left the house while Luke locked up the front door since everyone else already left.
"Yeah, well I guess they like you" He grinned. "I like you too, I mean. you're a really cool person. To like talk to and hang with" Luke stuttered. Lorelai just smirked and kissed him on the cheek.
"I like you too. You're really cool" Was all she wanted to say, she could have gone on about how she thinks he is cute, funny, sweet, caring, and how his touch is so warm. But she kept her mouth shut.
"What do you want to do?" Luke quickly asked getting off of the topic.
"Its your town, you tell me. What's interesting?"
"Nothing really, well there is"
"Luke!" a boy suddenly called interrupting him. The boy ran over, he had blonde spiky hair and emerald eyes. "Hey Luke, who is this?" the boy grinned looking Lorelai up and down.
"Lorelai, Adam" Luke quickly introduced.
"Lorelai, wow that's such a unique and beautiful name" Adam turned giving her his full attention.
"Thanks" she smiled,
"What are you guys doing?" Adam asked slightly turning back to Luke for a moment. "Maybe I can tag along"
"Cant" Luke quickly replied. They both glared at him waiting for a reason. "Its sort of a date" he finally came up with. "Me, and Lorelai. Together. Just us" He kept himself from snapping.
"Oh, well that's cool. We'll just hang out later. Wait I haven't seen you around. Does that mean you're new? Live around here?" Adam quickly questioned Lorelai.
"She doesn't live in Stars Hollow, listen we would love to chat but we have to go" Luke quickly replied before Lorelai even had a chance to say anything. Luke's hand then touched the lower part of Lorelai's back as he pushed her along.
"What was that?" Lorelai finally asked once they got farther down the street. His hand still never left her back.
"Just trust me, Adam isn't the type of guy you should be hanging with. Plus he isn't your type"
"Whoa, wait how do you know what 'my type' is?" She stopped walking.
"Well, I don't. what I meant was he's the type of guy who grows bored of girls easily. One moment he's into you. Then a girl walks by and bam he's gone and chasing her"
She chuckled. "thanks for the concern but First of all, I wasn't interested in him. Second, I am very different than most girls and I don't think any boy could get bored." She slyly smirked causing Luke to start breath heavily. She started walking past him standing tall and victorious.
"I'm in trouble" Luke mumbled to one of his friends, Sookie. They were in the town square and Lorelai was a little bit ahead just watching everything and everyone go by.
"What do you mean?" She asked looking up at him. His face was worried and confused.
"Just look at her. She's gorgeous and so funny, yet weird. Which of course makes her interesting" He started rambling.
"So you like her?" Sookie asked, kind of confused with his point. "What do you mean you're in trouble?"
"God, she's so out of my league. She just makes me so weak and I feel like I need to protect her." Luke moaned putting his face in his hands.
"So you do like her!" Sookie gasped getting excited.
"Shut up, you are so loud" He snapped.
"Luke likes Lorelai" She quickly sang making sure Lorelai couldn't hear her.
"I don't know what to do, I'm really not good with relationships or girls. Besides you I guess." he mumbled.
"But like told you before, she's different than other girls. Maybe this time it will work" Sookie smiled.
"I don't know ma-" He then stopped walking once he looked up. A couple feet ahead was Lorelai and that boy that brought her here. They were talking and she looked pissed off. Luke suddenly grew protective and mad that anybody would ever hurt Lorelai or ditch her at a party. Especially with crazy Carrie.