Hi! I've been so busy between school, work, and my various non-warrior cats related manuscripts (I currently have five-kill me), so I haven't written Mapledawn's story in a MINUTE. But I was sorting through my unread emails and found this gem. Content warning for profanity (although it has been censored)! Just thought everyone would like to see it if they haven't! My only guess is that this guy ("JJ DICKLONG," account deleted) is ether a) a troll or b) meant to comment on a different story. (Asterisks added to replace profanity).
Before reading, I'd like to leave you with a positive note: No matter who you are, what your level of writing skill is, how far along you are on the writing journey... Don't stop! Creative writing is, in my humble opinion, one of the most amazing, transcendent skills/activities humanity has ever produced. It goes beyond any other form of writing. Creative writing enacts poiesis . Meaning-making. Sublimation. It allows people to investigate fundamental human truths and experiences through PLAY-through creating other worlds (yes, even in fanfiction, where we modify another author's worlds, we are still creating something new). That's amazing.
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1661025111 . chapter 7
Take this ******* **** down.
I hate it. I hate it so ******* much that I couldn't even get to chapter 10 without having to stop reading due to the horrible quality and cringe plot. Stop burdening the warriors fandom with your garbage writing, I doubt that anyone actually likes your writing and often what happens is people give fake support to encourage you because they're "just trying to be nice". I know you probably won't listen to me because of the profanity and the points that lack description. But there isn't much else to be said about a fanfic this bad, and I really, truly, deeply hope that it is removed from this archive permanently either by you or the mods because I do not wish to see it anymore, or for anyone else to. I do not feel sorry for you, because it ultimately seems that you wrote this fic as a joke and maybe you intended for it to be this bad. But that is no excuse for writing something so truly horrible, and again I will recommend that you or a moderator take it down quickly. I can't believe you put so much effort into something that looks as if it was written by a mentally ******** child. And maybe you are.
Please, go plague another archive. No one really wants to see this here, and while they may say that's not true and I will inevitably get bashed for writing this review, it's all true and you should listen. I'm trying to help you and tell you what would be best to do with this. So please delete it right away. I mean, I couldn't even bring myself to read the next chapter, and the first few were quite a struggle to get through.
Delete this shit NOW.