Hey sorry for wait…just got signed up on … been more focused on original fictions…I will post another chap in the next couple days…it is summer so I have been trying to do things instead of sitting around :D ha. But please enjoy and again review! Been waiting on them…only 22 last time I checked…WANT MORE! ZOMBIE! Sorry :D But on Mibba if you want to read a story I am currently working on my name is JellyPiner. Story is called *An Original Cliché*.

Luke quickly and quietly snuck out of his house, he was allowed to leave but after the argument with his dad, leaving now would seem bad. He went to reach for his truck door but froze, the truck would be too loud and his father would surely be angry. So he sighed and turned, jogging to Crazy Carrie's house.

It took him 10 minutes, when he got there it was 10:15. He sighed as he looked up the house, one of the lights were on, he took a chance figuring it was her room. He glanced around and found a pebble, he picked it up and chucked it at the window. It clanked. He sighed and picked up another doing it once again. Finally Carrie opened her window and glanced down. From where he stood he can tell she was crying, all around her eyes were red.

"Hold on, ill be down" she whispered then shut her window. He paced back and forth for a few moments then the front door opened and she came out.

"Hey, so what's wr-"

She interrupted him with a hug, her arms wrapped around his strong and warm body. He confusedly and slowly put his arms around her returning the hug.

"Luke, I'm sorry. Believe it or not but you're the only one I could think of to call" she cried into his chest.

"What's wrong?" He asked. Her face looked up at him, a lonely and scared look filled her eyes.

"What's wrong with me?" she asked ignoring his question.

"What?"

"Why don't people like me? Why is everyone happy except me?" she asked putting her face back into Luke's chest.

"People like you," he stuttered un-sure what to say. "What's going on? Why did you call me?" he asked confused about the entire situation.

"Luke, I love you" She cried taking him back. "see! That expression you just gave proves you don't love me back"

"What?" He asked even more confused.

"I told, my boyfriend I loved him. Thought it was appropriate, we have been dating for an entire year almost"

"It's only been 2 month" He muttered.

"I told him I loved him and he gave me that same expression, then dumped me" She cried into his chest. Her fingers gripped tightly onto his shirt. His arms were placed around her back.

"He wasn't right for you" He simply said. "There is no point getting all upset if you told him how you felt and he fled. That means he was probably only interested in the sex or something" Luke tried his hardest to comfort her. She whipped her tears on his shirt then glanced up at him.

"Luke why are you so fantastic?" she asked. His face turned slightly pink. Before he could reply her lips quickly pressed against his. He was taken back and in shock for a good short moment. He tried to pull away, slightly enjoying the kiss but finally pulled her off.

He gasped for air, we was amazing with her tongue. NO, he mentally punished himself.

"Carrie, I'm dating someone" He breathed heavily. Her big watering eyes remained on his stern eyes.

"I'm so sorry." she cried again. "I didn't mean it, god I feel terrible" she kept rambling.

"It was fine, just don't do it again" he muttered placing his arms around her again comforting her.

Luke held her for about 20 minutes more, they just talked, he got her to smile and laugh. Finally when it was 10:45 they said their good byes and he walked home. He was confused about the entire first few minutes, but was glad he could fix things and help her.

The kiss was still amazing, which gave him a guilty feeling in his stomach.

"She's just experienced" he told himself, "I don't like her, I like Lorelai, Plus its crazy Carrie!" He yelled scolding himself. He then suddenly missed Lorelai, her blazing smile, brightest eyes he's ever seen. Curly brown hair, witty jokes and comments. Her sarcasm. He sighed in frustration then climbed up his porch. He entered the house and there sat his father, once again waiting for him.

Luke sighed in frustration once again as he entered. "Where the hell have you been?" William snapped.

"Out" the very stubborn Luke sighed.

"I don't want you to see her any fucking more" Will barked.

"See who?" Luke's defenses rose.

"Lorelai"

"I didn't see Lorelai, I would have needed my truck for that" I snapped, "I went to see Carrie, she said she needed me, I went there. I gave her a hug and she cried, because her boyfriend broke up with her. I cheered her up, we talked then I left" He left out the part about the kiss, but that wasn't a highlight at this moment.

"God, why are you being such a pain lately?" Will asked, mostly to himself.

"Why am I? you're the one not trusting me, and we never get in fights. You're the one starting them" Luke pointed out all of the minor facts.

"Ever since that girl you've been more distant and haven't been helping out!"

"No dad, I have been helping. You're just getting mad because I don't tell you everything that's going on right now, guess what I have that right"

"Not when you're living under my roof" William kept pausing between words to cough, Luke pushed it aside though.

"Well guess what, if you want me gone so much I'll leave! I'm 18 I'm allowed to move out" Luke yelled. Will's coughing got worse, it's been getting worse over the weeks. It seems to get the worse when she has stress.

"Then leave" Will urged. "Go ahead, since you hate me so much just go!" He snapped.

"Fine I will!" Luke said running to his room, he as quickly as he could grabbed a backpack and packed a few outfits for a few days. His deodorant, toothbrush, and his cash.

Luke stomped out his room and slammed the door behind him. He turned to find his father on the floor. He instantly dropped everything and ran to his dad's side. He gasped for air and Luke panicked.

"Liz!" He yelled the loudest he's ever yelled. She quickly ran out in Pj's and a messy bun. After she rubbed her eyes and realized what was going on she ran over to Luke, "What's going on?"

"Just call the fucking hospital or police" He snapped causing his sister to fumble with the phone.

"hello?" she frantically yelled into the phone.

"Dad" Luke whispered feeling a guilty feeling in his heart. "Dad I am sorry" He started crying. "Dad, please I am so sorry" he kept repeating over and over again as tears fell down his face.

"Luke," Liz whispered putting her hand on his back.

…

Luke paced the hospital waiting room. Liz sat on the chair silently freaking out. Her mind raced and her foot started tapping. It seemed hours passed before a worried doctor came out and called the 'Danes'.

"What's wrong?" Luke attacked the doctor. "Will he be okay?"

"He" the doctor hesitated.

A sinking feeling filled both Luke and Liz's heart. They both knew what was going to say, but they had a tiny glimpse of hope it was something else.

"Your father passed away"

short, but some interesting things happened...also sorry for slow update been working on two stories i have been writting for again if you like original stories (no fan-fic) check me out...trust me they are a lot better than this story...i dont think i do good with fan fics XD :)..just look up JellyPiner :) :) *Original Cliche* and *Bad Girl goes Good?..Doubt it*