Ok, so its been a while! And i have been educated in how to use this site! yay! And i have read my reviews! A bigger YAY! I just want to say thank you all for your kind words and constructive criticism. I will take any chance to improve my work that i can. SaintDogStreet- you should write a book. lol. Very useful stuff, thanks. I will also take up your recommendation and darbymonster's for a better reader.
On that note, i would love to take up your offer Ursula4x. I have a chapter waiting to be uploading... sort of, the first half of it is in oxford on my friends computer, and she's in Gambia teaching until the end of next week (so that would be the 16th). The other half is waiting for its counterpart on my own computer. But as soon as the two are joined i would love to send it to you and get it checked out? I don't want any of my readers teeth hurting. ;)
I just wanted to let you all know that i havent forgotten about this story, it has just been delayed. I also don't want my ramblings to raise everyone's hope who is on my alerts for this story, so i have added a little something.
Enjoy, and another chapter should be up shortly after the 16th April.
Chow for now! x
He watched from afar. That was best, but not too far. He had seen Neal enter the house and it pained him to sit on the side lines while he knew that Neal would be opening his gift. He wanted to see him when he did. Alas, forces kept them apart. Instead he waited for him to walk out of the house, that sight would have to do.
He chuckled to himself. It had finally begun. He had been planning for quite some time now, just a little over four years to be precise.
The FBI had had their time; they could not be selfish anymore. Soon, all his plans, everything, would unravel, and then he would have what he wanted.
Are you scared Neal? He wondered.