So a few weeks ago I decided yeah I'll update again and then my stupid mum goes - Your banned from your laptop for a month. Cos I was an hour late home. Cos my phone had the wrong time. Anyway sorry about my burst out, I wasn't in a good mood and people at school keep telling me I'm a crap writer and that I shouldn't do this kinda thing cos everyone will find it all crap. Not very good for your esteem btw.

Disclaimer - Max Ride characters belong to *drum Roll* JP!

On to the story ;)


I sat staring at the wall. The same peice of wall I have been staring at for the past year. How do I know It's been a year, cos Raven was born. My beautiful Raven.

Now I really was at the school. And I was wanting to escape. The world thinks I'm dead though, which isn't good at all. My mum, Ella, others that actually like me unlike the damn bitches whom made me get sent to this hell hole.

"Max?" Holly's voice stumbled. I smiled over to her.

"Yeah?" I asked.

"We all want to escape. You wanna come?" she asked. Her friends/flock nodded. Holly's mane of golden curls fell down her back loosely, her eyes weak, skin so tight on her bones, scars all over her skin, broken and cracked lips which sept blood staining them blood red, the others looked in smiler state.

"Sure" I replied. And I followed them out the safest, no enemies way.


I grabbed Raven in my arms and ran three steps forward. then jumped into the air, my wings moving powerfully in the sky. I clutched Raven into my chest. We were headed to my Mums. and The Flock better not be there, or hell will break loose. I landed in the woodsy clearing near my mums to see Iggy and Nudge standing outside looking at the sky.

Shit. The flock are here. I thought miserably.

I wouldn't be so sure Max. Just because Nudge and Iggy are there doesn't mean the others are. The world has changed drastically in the year you were away. If you don't remember today was the day they kicked you out as well. The flocks lives have changed drastically.

Okay to say I was stunned was an understatement. I didn't even bother to ask the voice what it meant. Instead I tripped over a branch and screamed out a little. My new friends hid whilst Iggy and Nudge looked startled. Damn.

"Hello." Came Nudges quivering voice. I stood u and moved back a few steps. "We won't hurt you." Nudge whispered again. I was frozen as her leg came into view, then her body and head. I stood clutching Raven. Nudge stopped and stared. Tears filled her wide chocolate brown eyes. She began sobbing hard saying "Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry." over and over again.

"Nudge what is it?" Iggy asked as he came into view.

"Max." She sobbed. Iggy stopped in his tracks. I gasped when I saw him fully.

"Iggy?" I asked. "What happened?"


MWAH ha ha ha

cliffy.

R&R for the next chapter. ;)