The love-at-first-sight thing was a bit of a gamble and I had both responses of like and dislike it. I know in the book they didn't fall in love until a lot later on but I thought that if I changed it slightly it wouldn't be that bad! Sorry if you didn't like it, it gets better later on.

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Edward POV

Alice accepted the fact that I could control myself around Bella after a quick vision of me standing next to her but not ripping her head off. That was, she accepted that I could control myself, but still didn't trust me to be alone with Bella and so she insisted of being present at the questioning. I hadn't told a soul about my feeling for Bella, expecting them to pass by, and no one seemed to notice.

When Alice had got home from school she told Carlisle what almost happened in biology and all about her vision. She told him that she and I would ask Bella what she knew about us and how she knew it. He didn't want really me to go near her, just incase, but she reassured him that I could do it and if anything was to go wrong she could stop me. He still didn't like it, but trusted her judgement.

We already had a plan in hand; while she was at the hospital we would sabotage her truck so in the middle of the journey it would break down. She would pull over to the side of the road and attempt to find out what was wrong. That's when Alice and I would come in. We would ask if she wanted a lift, what ever she said we stay with her and ask her questions, threaten her not to tell a soul and leave the poor girl scared half to death – to be honest we were unsure if we could scare her after we had seen Alice's vision. I didn't like the idea of scaring her anyway, I wanted to protect her not scare her.

We left the house around 5.00pm after a quick hunt, Carlisle told us Bella usually left the hospital round 9pm but we just wanted to be sure we caught her. We drove to the hospital and parked in the back where no one would see our car unless they where standing 10 feet in front of it. I went over to Bella's car and popped the hood. She had an extremely old truck and this made it more difficult – I was used to brand new sport cars when it came to mechanics. I loosen a few nuts and bolts, which after 5 miles or so would be making such a noise it would force Bella to pull over, I closed the hood and turned back to the car where Alice and I awaited Bella to leave the hospital.

She came out about 10 minutes later and she looked like she had been crying. What had happened? Maybe tonight wasn't the best time for a confrontation. I looked over to Alice with question in my eyes. She just shook her head.

"I don't know Edward, I didn't see what happened," she told me softly.

"Maybe-" I started.

"No Edward, we should do this today," she told me sternly, with a determined look on her face.

We continued to watch Bella get into her car, start it and leave. We left the car park a few minutes after her, making completely sure she didn't notice us.

Bella POV

I arrived at the hospital in about 10 minutes and went straight to Charlie. He was sitting up in bed, watching TV. Billy was in his wheelchair next to him, chatting away about any old thing.

"Hey guys," I told them as I walked in, "I thought you weren't coming down Billy, what's changed?" I said this smugly. I knew exactly what had changed; Billy had come to his senses and realized his best friend was in dire need of him.

"Well, I couldn't leave old Charlie here eating this disgusting hospital food without some company," he smiled at Charlie.

"Who you calling old?" Charlie said in return. We all laughed together.

"Where's Jake?" I asked walking over to them both. Billy's face turned grave.

"He's waiting for you out in the hall," I nodded and left the room. I walked down the corridor until I came face to face with Jacob, he had changed dramatically in the last few days and he now stood well over 6" and cut his hair incredibly short. I knew what this meant and had been expecting it for a few months now after I had heard about Sam. He looked to me with a mixture of anger and betrayal.

"What's wrong?" I asked, though I had a good idea about why he was angry with me. He motioned us to go into an empty patients room and then closed the door. I turned to him with a look of concern; this seemed to soften him a bit but not much.

"Why Bella?" he asked grinding his teeth together.

"Maybe we shouldn't do this here," I told him blankly.

"You knew everything and still didn't tell me. Why? And how is that bloodsucking bitch your mother," he spat. I looked at him in pure shock; he had never spoken to me like this. He had always been a loveable, smiling, good-hearted Jacob. Anger began to pump around me as he said this.

"Don't you dare speak about my mother like that you overgrown mutt!" I spat back, "and you know perfectly well why I didn't tell you what you would become. You knew the stories but chose to ignore them, it is more your fault, not mine." He seemed rather taken aback by my outburst. I softened slightly.

"Look Jake, why are we fighting over this? Your my best friend, I don't want to lose you."

"Every summer, you were with them. You're mom's a-" he cut short, "You're a traitor Bella, a fall blown traitor." Tears streamed from both mine and his eyes, and then Jacob began to shake.

"Get out of here Jacob. Now. Before you lose it," I paused, "she's my mom Jacob, my mom. You have grown up with us, she has been as much of mom to you as she is to me," and then a walked out, not turning back. I just kept walking. I walked out of the ward; I walked out of the building and then walked to my car. I just felt numb; I wanted to go home, to sleep the sadness away. I had a strong feeling that I had just lost my best friend.

I turned the ignition and started to drive. I drove until I heard a strange noise coming from the engine, I pulled over and realized my car had just broken down. I couldn't hold it together any longer. I slumped forward on the seat and put my head on the wheel, crying my heart out.

When twilight started to consume the sky I tried my car again. It worked this time and I continued on my way home. The fact that the car started again didn't seem odd to me, I was too miserable to care.

But I could have sworn I saw a man in the bushes as I drove away. Then man had pail skin and golden eyes, but his face was hidden by shadow. I forgot about him as soon as I hit the freeway.

I know this was a short chapter but I thought it was more effective that way.

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