Hi! hello everyon happy 2009! Well I read through this story very hard to read an comprehend so I've rewritten and added stuff so if you'll take the time to reread this I'll be posting a new chapter soon i hope so yes. It is way better I'm hoping to get some reveiws before I addd a chapter, I meaan 1 reveiw does not look good, anyways! read reveiw it is much better!