Hey guys im back, my parents toke my to English school so now I tink my granmer is bettere, I see I didnt finish the storey so I decid to finish it now.
Wen goreden wake he see that klinder run away with alez so he get up and walk forward , he find fun on groud and pick up the gun hade no bullits but gorden say is okay and continu walking forward. Sudnley klinder robote jump out of no where and scar goreden. Klinder laugh evely and holds alex hard. Gorden is mad and say let alez go u dumm old mane klinder say no and hit gorden again. Gorden say ow and take gun and shoting robote klinder say ha u cant brak my roobot it made of metul bullit cant hurt it so Gordon pick up grenade and scream loud and trow and klinder robote. It blow up and aklinder scream and die. Alex git free nad hug and kise goredon say thanks you so mchui fro saveing me goredon goredon say it okay no problem andtake alex back home and tey live happy ever aefter. The end.
Hope you enjoe my storey I work hard on it my momy sayd its good storey and so dus my friends Jacob and timothy thank you raet and revew