Dear Readers:
Earlier today when I should have been writing papers for finals, I somehow ended up on , looking at the first story that I ever wrote that still remains my favorite. Upon re-reading it, I was horrified to discover how flippantly I once took the basic rules of the English language.
So today, a few years older and wiser, I went through and corrected all of my heinous mistakes to both make myself feel less ashamed and also to improve the reading experience. So please enjoy, review, and please let me know if you spot any errors I did not catch!
Thank you!
~ EmeraldFire512