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Chapter 1
I walk through the hallway in my new cheerios outfit my head was held higher than usual, and I walked with a little sway. I was perplexed at how people seem to notice me now, I hear them whispering 'look who got hot overnight'.
I'm at my locker for about five minutes rearranging some stuff, when a hand hits my ass. Bewildered I abruptly turn around. Standing there is none other than Santana Lopez.
"Damn Ray, I never noticed how nice your legs were." She mumbled, still checking me out. It felt very weird, a girl checking me out, not to sound conceited or anything but I really do like this attention. At least someone thinks I look good other than Finn, I had thought to myself, as a smile planted itself on my face.
"Thank you. Your legs … are.. very nice too?" I said, not really knowing how to reply I felt embarrassment coursing through me, which made a blush creep into my checks, thankfully she seemed to be happy, as I saw a grin erupt from her usually stern face.
I never noticed this before, because she is always trying to ruin my life, but Santana is very pulchritudinous.
I then shut my locker, gently, so Santana and I could head to our first class which we had together. Spanish, I usually dread this class because of the jocks, but I'm slushy free still. It's a record.
We start walking that way arm in arm. The feeling is very gratifying, our hips seem to say in unison as people part to let us through. The only way I could sum up the looks of people as they saw us was consternation.
Then we enter the class room, looks of shock stare us down, even Mr. Schue.
"Any of you got a problem?" Santana says, no one dared to reply. "That's what I thought, Gayrofsky out of Ray's new seat!" Dave didn't even look up to face her, fear imbedded in his features; he took the seat as far away from them as he could.
"You really have to teach me how to do that." I whisper to Santana, she grins and nods her head. Then we turn to pay attention to Mr. Schue.
It was nice finally having a friend that stood up for me. When she did that I felt so, adulated.
"I wonder if she burned her hideous grandma clothes." I heard Kurt say. This was the wrong day for anyone to give me shit. I start to wonder what other things they said about me, then I walk up to him.
"What's your problem Kurt? You like Finn and now we are over go get him, oh wait, he still likes girls and you are related now. Wouldn't put being incest behind you though, better buy Finn a rape whistle." With that I turn around, my hair swings around and hit him in the face. I don't look back I just strut down the hallway like it's a runway, and I'm its only model.
I walk out of the doors, the adrenaline pumping through my veins. Something about telling off Kurt made me feel so marvelous.
I walk up to the field where we are having a practice before the game, it's still pretty vacant. I walk over to the bleachers and put my bag down. Then I see Santana walking towards me, seemingly proud.
"I heard you told of closet-case and I just wanted to tell you.. I'm proud." She smiles and genuine smile, then shocks me as she pulls me in for a hug.
"They grow up so fast." I hear her mumble, as she starts fake pouting. We both start laughing, and then we see Sue on her way over.
We jog over to the field to start practice.
"You're all SLOPPY!" I hear Sue say into her megaphone, after we had done a flawless routine. She mumbled more but I just toned her out for a while. She doesn't hate us she just thinks this will toughen us up.
(Sue's PoV)
In my years of being a cheer coach I have never seen cheerleading that sloppy and that includes 3rd graders doing a cheer to 'bottoms up'. I am then interrupted from my thoughts
"Ah, William! I was just telling my cheerios how sloppy they're being. Doesn't Berry just look so good in a uniform?" I say, emphasizing on Berry in attempt to anger him. Shock hits his oddly shaped face.
"I won't let you ruin Glee Club anymore Sue." He says, I swear this man is so conceited, I don't live my life you bring him down, well I take that back maybe I do. I grin is satisfaction as William Schuester, my enemy sulks away.
(Rachel's PoV)
Me and Santana walk of the field after practice, arm in arm, laughing about something Brittney had said.
"Hey Ray, you want to hit up the mall with me in an hour?" She said, I was surprised at this but I really did want to hang out with my new friend.
"Sure, I just want to change out of this and I'll be ready." I say, walking to my Prius.
-An hour later-
I'm waiting at my door for Santana to pick me up. I couldn't lie and say I wasn't excited for this trip. I see her car pull up.
I walk out of my house and casually walk over to her dark blue BMW. I get in the front seat, her cars seats are very comfortable. The ride to the mall was interesting. She liked Avril Lavigne, she was my new music idol.
"Okay, I want to start off with getting our nails done, then we move on to hair, then we need a dress." Santana said, she looked determined, then it hit me, a dress? For what!
"Wait, why do we need a dress?" I say, confused. Santana laughs for a minute.
"I'm having a party Friday! Duh." She said. A party? I smile as I realize this would be my first party. Then Santana makes an abrupt turn into the nail and hair salon.
"Hey Samantha, I want my usual red tips. Get Amanda for my friend here. She wants.." She looked at me expecting an answer. "Black tips." I say to the girl. Santana giggles.
"Someone's a little frisky." I grin at her and then the girls start on our nails.
"So why are you getting your hair done? its fine the way it is." I notice the evil smirk on her face.
"I know I'm not getting my hair done, you are." She said. She's evil, but then again I am trying out a new look so why not. I feel a rush of adrenaline as I sit in the chair.
"Okay, shoulder length, layers. Go a shade or two darker." Santana says. My eyes widen, dying my hair was something I hadn't signed up too. I look over at her and she has a reassuring smile on her face.
An hour later
I walk out over to the waiting area, and go up to Santana. Her eyes widen as she sees me.
"Ray you look.. hot!" I grin, I had already paid for it in the back so we join arms again and go into the nearest store with new found confidence. Must be the hair.
Santana quickly finds a dress she approves of for herself, red and strapless, Ruffles toward the bottom. Say what you want about her but she does have good taste.
I then find a black dress, low cut, straps but they are very thin.
We then make our way with the dresses in arm to pay.
Well this party will be… interesting.
But really I had no idea.
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