Thanks to ALL my WONDERFUL reviewers!
HMNIB: I am glad that my story is AWESOME! Also you WERE HYPER!
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Valid User Name: WOW I'M GOOD ENOUGH FOR THE PHONE! I'm so PROUD of myself, thank you so much for having my story PHONE worthy!
EmberMclain13: No not the cement block of DOOM! –groans- I've been hanging out with the Box Ghost too much!
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Dani Rose Phantom: Ya Sorry about the short chapters, but I update daily (usually) so I think it's okay as long as people don't complain to much!
Kirani56: Thanks I want to be a Author when I grow up this is practice. Also I'm with you VALERIE LET DANNY OUT! –stops and thinks- On second thought I can't let you do that yet or the story would be over to fast!
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Chapter 4: A Photo and Pain
She didn't see the truth in tell it was too late, their hero, her enemy, was gone, and for some reason she cried for him.
Valerie smiled as she entered into the Guys in White HQ, the giant sliding doors shut behind her trapping her in with her prey. The smile only grew bigger as the Guys in White walked up to her.
"What do you want Red Huntress?" The first one asked.
Valerie smiled, "It's not what I want; it's what I have that you want." Valerie held up the thermos, and explained. "Inside here is Phantom and he can be yours if you can pay the right price."
Immediately they Guys in White pulled out a check and began to write on it. They then later handed it to Valerie, who looked at the price wide eyed, she was rich. All she had to say was, "Wow that's a lot of zeros." She tossed the Guys in White her thermos, who ran off with it.
Still carrying the check she ran after them, she had to watch this. Phantom's pain would be her revenge. She smiled as the Guys in White put the thermos up to a container, and pushed the release button.
Phantom came swirling out, and he landed in the containment unit, with a thud. One of the Guys in White pushed a button and a ghost shield came up around the portal.
Valerie looked at Phantom and then did a double take, the once cocky ghost boy was curled in a ball his head in his knees. His once proud hazmat suit was torn and ectoplasmic blood dripped from his wounds. (In this fic, when Danny is in ghost form only his ectoplasm is visible) His body trembled with sobs and Valerie could see a crumbled up photo in his hand. Clenched in his fist, he clung to it so tightly that Valerie wondered if he would ever let go.
The Guys in White walked around the cylinder containment unit, watching Phantom waiting for him to try something, but he didn't. Finally one of the Guys in White, Agent X, came up and banged on glass. "Look at us ghost," he ordered.
Phantom's head stayed down. Agent X's face got red and his eyes flared, "I said look at me ghost," He said slowly. When Phantom didn't look up, he said, "Fine then we'll do things my way.." Agent X reached and pushed a button.
Valerie's eyes went wide, as volts of green energy began to strike Phantom's body. He screamed, throwing his head back from the pain, his green eyes were shut tight, but Valerie could see the tears. His hands opened from the pain and Valerie watched the photo flutter down, the volts of green going right through the paper.
She looked at it through the glass and gasped, it was a picture of the Fentons, Sam, and Tucker. Wet tears had soaked the paper, and as Valerie looked from the picture to Phantom, screaming in pain, the check seemed to become heavier in her hand. Then the energy stopped and Phantom landed on his knees panting heavily and crying, the cocky Phantom was gone, replaced by some stranger to her. Then it dawned on her, she had broken his spirits, she had taken him away from those he loved, she had destroyed him. It was then that she ran.
She faintly heard Agent X say, "Look at me."
Followed by Phantom's screams, echoing through the halls. It was then that Valerie cried for her enemy, what had she done? She had killed a hero, but she had just noticed that now, she was too late.
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