Thanks to all my great reviewers
Darkness Bandit: The Great One is Danny. Frost bite and his people call him that.
Dragonsbreath101: Here you go an update (Thanks for the smiley)
Kirani56: Well I never tell you out right who hit Danny, but here is a hint the ghost calls Danny Great One
HMNIB: Ya its always weird when you try to get people to do something and they don't do it
Emberstill2lazy2login: Why? Do you know how hard it is to type when the Box Ghost and The Lunch Lady are watching you! (Not to mention that he proposed to her while I was typing EWWW)
KatiekkxD: No not the Anticreep Stick! –runs off screaming-
CJWrites: Ya a SMILEY of DOOM! –smacks head- I've been hanging out with the Box Ghost too much.
WizardNinjaOfEpicAwesomeness: Thanks I'm glad my story in your words is epic!
D: Okay then, I'm still glad you reviewed!
Once again too lazy to login: Ya another smiley man I get a ton of these now!
Pink Monster GRRR: I never tell you exactly who took Val, but I drop hints and who knows I might tell
Acosta peres jose ramiro: YES Finally a person who got that Frostbite was the one you shot Val thank you!
Gothsamphan12: Thanks I too agree that this story is AWESOME!
Mrs. Phantom: I so agree dream on Paulina!
WhatNooooI'mNotACONTRACTOR: Yo, me likes that you reviewed thanks!
Jessie phantom: Um I'm sorry I never got your e-mail so ya . . . thanks for the review though.
MOONLIGHT-97: YA A SMILEY. *runs around the room screaming* I LOVE SMILEYS!
Turkeyhead987: NOOO you can't die you are my best friend!
Gothgeek49: He he I love it when people review and they are hyper!
Yaythe1st: Thanks here is your review!
Okay people my next goal is 60 lets go for IT!
Chapter 6: All Tied Up
She wouldn't ever know for sure who had caught her, but she knew that she deserved it.
When Valerie awoke her head hurt, her eyes were blurry, but she was alive. As her eyes began to focus, she looked around. She was in a small room, her hands and feet cuffed to the chair. She struggled , but only succeeded in tipping the chair over, making her land on her side with a gasp, the air getting knocked out of her.
"That wasn't very smart," A cold voice spoke through the darkness.
Valerie stopped looking frightful, "Who's there?" She asked trying to sound brave and angry, but it didn't come out that way. Her voice was a frighten squeak, matching her eyes that darted left and right like a cornered animal.
The voice laughed, "Why should I tell you?"
Valerie gulped the voice was full of hatred and disgusted, "Well can I at least see who I am talking to."
Valerie wasn't sure, but when the voice spoke again she was sure that the being was smiling, "Oh of course Hunter, I'll let you see who I am."
Valerie cringed as a figure appeared from the darkness, then fear was replaced by surprise her capture was a girl.
Valerie blinked who was that? The girl was wearing a black suit similar to hers, but it seemed to be more of a Hazmat suit, and she had on black combat boots, her hair was up in a braid and fell out of the top of the mask she wore. An ectogun hung by her side and her purple eyes glared at her with such hate, that if looks could kill Valerie would have been dead three times over.
"What surprised?" The girl spoke Valerie was sure she smiled. "What am I not what you expected?"
Valerie didn't answer, she just looked away. Why was the girl here, what had she done?
Valerie was torn out of her thoughts by the charge of the ectogun and the girl's harsh yell, "Where is he!"
Valerie blinked, did she mean Phantom? No she couldn't have, no one had been around when she had caught him.
"I don't know what you're talking about!" Valerie lied, looking away.
"Oh really?" The girl asked, mocking surprise. "Oh my mistake, I guess I'll just leave then. Oh, but look I seem to have lost the key to your cuffs, I guess I'll just leave you here to rot."
The girl began to walk away before Valerie panicked and called out, "Wait I do know where he is !"
The girl turned, "You do?" Her purple eyes flamed once again with anger.
Valerie nodded and wet her lips, "I gave him to the Guys in White."
The girl's eyes filled with fear, before the anger returned, "You did what!"
Valerie winced and whispered, "I gave him to the Guys in White."
"You idiot they're going to kill him!" The girl kicked her hard in the gut and Valerie whimpered. "I can't believe you!"
With that the purple eyed, black suited girl ran. "Wait," Valerie called tears forming in her eyes. "What about me?" But the girl was lost, and Valerie was alone only the dust and whistling winds were there to keep her company.
Okay people remember mine I'm mean our goal for 60 reviews!
Also for those who like this story you might want to check out
Without a Second Glance
Maybe I'll get Another Chance
And
Seas of Hate (This follows a similar story line as this one, but you have to read the first two before this one its sort of a series)
Also if you just want a completely random thing to read check out,
Weird Danny Phantom Text