Hey Guys! Look am I doing something wrong? I Don't want to sound ungrateful or anything, really I Don't! But for my last chapter I only got 3 reviews...
do you not like my work?
I still haven't got any votes on the 'Bandslam' thing! Do you guys want me to add it to my story or not?
Thankyou to my AMAZING Beta Reader HOAFAN4EVER! :D
Nina's POV:
I couldn't believe my eyes! OK maybe it was to be expected but it was still a HUGE shock to see Amber and Alfie sat on Amber's bed Kissing!
As soon as they heard me hit my head on the door, (Owch!) they sprang apart like magnets repelling each other, it was actually quite funny and I would have laughed but I was sure I felt a concussion coming on from my blow to the head.
I suddenly felt really drowsy, my vision began to fog up, and the last thing I saw was Amber and Alfie's horrified faces before my knees gave way and I felt myself falling, only to be consumed in darkness before I could hit the carpeted floor.
Fabian's POV:
I heard a scream and looked up from my game of cards with Mick.
It was very high-pitched so I figured it must be Amber. What could Amber possibly be screaming about at this early hour? She was Amber, I didn't even think she would be up at this hour! She always moaned at us if we made to much noise and woke her up. She says she needs her 'Beauty Sleep'.
So what could possibly cause her to scream?
Nina.
Nina!
I gave Mick a shocked look, only to see my expression mirrored in his face.
I dropped my cards, ran out the door, and sprinted up the stairs with Mick hot on my heels.
I crashed through the bedroom door.
"What is it? What's wrong? Is anyone hurt?" I gabled. But they knew my questions were about Nina.
Amber was bent over an unconscious Nina and Alfie was stood in the corner on the phone to the ambulance.
I crouched down next to Nina and took her hand in mine.
Alfie put the phone down and sighed.
"When?" I asked simply.
"5 Minutes." H said sighing.
I sat with Nina until the ambulance got here.
As they were lifting her in on a stretcher they paused.
"Do you want to come with her?" one of the paramedics asked me and Amber.
I nodded solemnly and so did Amber, she was to busy trying to wipe the tears from her cheeks.
Im SO sorry i couldnt update yesterday it was just because i couldnt find time and i was up all night finishing this chapter! so i had to post it today!
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