A/N: I swear I thought I had this ready beforehand. You probably hate me for leaving you guys with a cliffee like that. I feel like changing the flock's names. So, you'll know their real names in this chappee. I remembered that I forgot the disclaimer the whole time. So, I don't own Max Ride times, um, 30 something chapters? I don't know how many chapters there will be the whole thing. QUESTION TIME!
Question Time works like this, you ask me anything you are confused about and I reply to it right back at you! YAY!
Okay, To ChocolateChipCookie (Luv your name by the way.)
That was kinda confusing...I don't know what her name is.
I looked back at the chapter and realized that you are definitely right. I tried to fix it, but fanfiction won't let me. Ugh. So basically, Max was going through a bunch of names in her head and tried them out. They weren't very good. Her new name is now Phoenix. PS, She HATES the flock.
Rainbowdragongirl101
this awesome you should totally keep this up! also after a while i think you should have max/phoenix's new flock and her old flock meet up and then like, have fang totally tick max/phoenix off and have her throw like fire balls or something at him.
I LURV your idea, but I think Fax lovers, including myself, will hate me if Fang dies because of Max throwing a fireball at him. They would hate that, but maybe he doesn't have to die off. Hm...I'll think about it. You are sort of right, though. But, Phoenix is Max. Max has to be Phoenix, meaning she has to pretend she has no clue about the flock. Watch, it's coming at about chapter 5 or 7.
Candy Mars
great start but u should put less space between quote marks i can't wait2 see who did it
I think I forgot that part. Oh no. Plot hole. At least you brought it to my attention. Okay people, one clue clue, it is NOT Max or Fang.
Dreams of the Darkness
Ohh, good story update! Can Max control the weather now?
Yeah, she can control the weather AND the elements.
THANK YOU TO EVERYONE WHO REVIEWED! I HEART YOU! To FANGirl, Thank you for being my first reviewer, so much. But, you were, sadly an anonymous reviewer.
(BTW, I need a beta reader, so please with a cherry on top can you beta my story if you are one?)
CHAPTER 3,
Max POV
Okay, okay, I need a plan other than get them out of there! I'll see if I can contact Lilly, like she had beforehand when I let down my walls. Slowly, (You don't know how hard it is to bring down mind walls. It's not as easy as bringing them up!) I brought down my mind walls and screamed out to a mind reader anywhere, LILLY ARE YOU THERE?, and waited for a response.
Jeezies, you don't have to scream!
I couldn't keep the joy out of my voice(mind) when I thought back at her, you're still alive!
Why wouldn't I be?
Um, you said you had to go because of the scientists. I thought again, relief evident in my sagging shoulders.
I've been trying to reach you for days and days and days!
You mean one day... I thought again, now a bit annoyed but not.
Oh, well you are in New Jersey, just to let you know.
Thanks!, I thought back. (A/N: OK, I am bored of her saying she thought back, so when Max thinks back to a voice in her head, any voice, even Angel's, it'll be bold italics. K? Bye!)
You might want to know how I know this and where in Virginia are we?
Er... Yeah.
We are in Big Stone Gap, Virginia. I know where you are because that's one of our family's powers. Can you come quickly? We need a mommy like you were to your flock, not a daddy though, we don't have a daddy like your family did. I hope that's okay?
Aw... Sweetie, I'll be there ASAP.
With that I slammed my mind walls back up. It's nice to know where I'm going at least. I'll get a map and head down to save them, oh , and create a plan. It should be easy, considering I can, um, sort of create a mountain in the middle of nowhere. Don't worry though! I got it back in! With, an earthquake though. It only surrounded the mountain, so that's a good thing, right? It looks like new now! Just don't think about the others Lil' mentioned and I'll be fine. Though, I don't know how she knew about them... Oh, it might be the fact that I was ranting about them when I subconsciously let down my walls...
Back to the plan. It should be simple. Burn the Erasers, Rain on any Fly-boys when I'm outside, inside I'll burn them too! So, burn any thing in the way, grab and free the new flock, keep my mind walls up unless, communication is necessary, teach my new flock mind walls, actually, maybe not. Oh, and stay as Phoenix the whole way through, Good thing that I can lie well. If I can lie, I can act. Right?
It's good that I'm clean, because I have to go grab a map from a rest stop. I'll just pay for it with the Max Ride Card! There. My plan is all set! Now, just to set it in action...
(Readers...meet line that I am too lazy to draw! Hi everybody! That's enough. Go away now line.)
Crouched in the bushes, I stood my ground, waiting for the search lights to go away. Ouch, it hurts to be in a bush. It's not just a bunch of fluff like it is in the movies you know. It has branches and brambles, and this one even has thorns!
Back on track, back on track, look at the School...Looking at the Erasers, I spied an opening! Aha! Quickly using my super speed, I lent down, whipped out my wings, and flew super speed straight through the door, all while staying as close to the ground as I could. If you don't know, it stings your eyes when flying super speed through a door. At least I've been through worse.
Quickly letting down my mind walls, I straight away asked Lilly what room she was in.
Phoe! You're here! Ha. And they said you wouldn't come!
Please Lilly, room number now! Before I have to burn the Erasers to oblivion!
Okay, room 1356, the keys are on the hook! Go! Go! GO!
Getting the info I needed, I surrounded myself with a shield of flame. Surprisingly, It didn't hurt. Now only if I could avoid the alarms... BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIINNNNGG! Oops.
