Just a quick note before I post the next chapter. I have really appreciated all of your reviews, so thank you! But there was one that I would like to mention-
"the funny thing is you wrote "Amazing story/plotline" in your story description! guess what?, it isn't! this story is about as original as fireworks in chinatown, it's unimmaginative, badly written and frankly seems like it comes from the mind of a retarded 6 year old. Please do the world a favour and never ever write again"
What's funny is that you submitted this as an anonymous review. HAHA. This reminds me of Formspring...what's the point in insulting someone if you're going to hide behind a curtain? First off, I doubt you passed your English class because you don't even know how to spell or punctuate properly. Second off, how about you think about what you're saying before you call someone retarded? I take that word very offensively because of personal reasons.
Maybe I'm wrong, but can you write a good story? If you can, please post a NON-ANONYMOUS review so I can read YOUR work.
Until then, next time read what happens next before you say it's unoriginal, because like every story, you can't just start off right in the middle of the action. It has to build up, leading up to the climax and the ending of the story. I have no problem with reviews critiquing my work so I become better, but that is not what you did. You are a bully, and people like you are what caused a girl at my school to commit suicide last night.
I hope you change your ways and live a good life. I honestly do.
If anyone disagrees with this, please send a review or Private Message letting me know. Also, please let me know if this story really does stink ;-)
Enjoy the next chapter!