Disclaimer: I don't own That 70's Show or its cast or anything.
A/N: I'm sorry last chapter was pretty OOC I'll try to keep it more true to the show in the following chapters. And I don't remember if Laurie was there or not at this point, but in this she is, and it's the old Laurie. Plus I'm going to start putting in where the like transitions would go, so in case you don't know what I mean that's the things in between with the characters dancing or jumping or whatever, sorry idk what to call them. And finally, sorry this chapter's a bit for the reviews and advice (: enjoy.
Jackie and Hyde were sitting at the breakfast table in the Forman kitchen looking through house ads.
"Oooo!" squealed Jackie, "Steven look at this one! It's pink!"
"No chance in hell am I living in a pink house." said Hyde.
"But Steeeven!" Jackie wined.
"Nope." said Hyde, crossing his arms and leaning back,
Jackie scowled and kicked Hyde in the shins, causing Hyde to lean over in pain.
"Geez Jackie, will you get some softer shoes!" Hyde complained.
Jackie folded her arms and pouted when Kitty walked in.
"Hello you two!" she said cheerfully, "Looking for houses are we? Because you don't love me anymore!" she said, her face changing, looking like she might cry.
"Mrs. Forman, you know it's not that. Jackie can't be living with Donna when she's pregnant, and definitely not when we have a baby." Hyde tried to explain.
"Oh, I know," said Kitty, a bit more cheerfully, "I guess I still have two babies left." She said smiling when Eric, Laurie, and Red walked in.
"Hopefully not for long." said Red.
"Don't worry, it won't be." said Eric smiling, "After me and Donna get married, me and my little honey bunch will be living in our own place."
Red actually smiled, Kitty looked sad again, and Jackie and Hyde just rolled their eyes at Eric.
**********THEME SONG**********
In the circle:
CUT TO ERIC AND DONNA
"So Hyde? You and the devil checking out the house down the street today?" said Eric.
CUT TO HYDE
"Yup, I sure am glad that guy's moving out. There are no freaking houses in this place!" said Hyde.
CUT TO FEZ
"I do not like this whole pregnancy thing very much, my beautiful goddess is going to get fat!" said Fez, getting a punch in the arm from Hyde, "Aye Hyde! It's not like we weren't all thinking it you sonofabitch!" he said taking a bite of his candy bar.
CUT TO KELSO
"Nah, see it's ok buddy, because before they get fat, they just get really big boobs!" he said laughing hysterically until Hyde silences him with a punch.
CUT TO ERIC AND DONNA
Donna shook her head at Kelso and Fez's idiocy then turns to face Hyde, "So Hyde is it a nice place?"
CUT TO HYDE
"I don't know yet, but it took a lot to convince Jackie to give it a shot." Said Hyde
CUT TO ERIC AND DONNA
"Why?" said Eric looking confused.
CUT TO HYDE
"She said a fat person lived there." said Hyde.
CUT TO ICE CREAM CIRCLE IN KITCHEN
CUT TO JACKIE
"I can't believe I might live in a fat person house!" said Jackie.
CUT TO LAURIE
"I can't believe you'll be living with the orphan." said Laurie.
CUT TO KITTY
"I can't believe my babies are all leaving me!" cried Kitty.
CUT TO RED
"I can't believe I'm here right now," said Red grumpily, getting up to leave.
********TRANSITION*************
Hyde and Jackie are walking through an empty looking, white house. In the middle there's a living room, with an open space to a kitchen on the right, , with stairs next to the wall on the left, and on the left there's a door leading to an empty room, and of course, a front door.
"Well I think we should get it," said Hyde, "There's enough space, it pretty nice, in the neighborhood, and most importantly, cheap."
"It looks like a poor person lives here." said Jackie frowning.
"We are poor," said Hyde, "And besides it's the best we're going to get."
Jackie, sighed, defeated, "Fine, but only if you let me paint the bathroom pink." She said grumpily.
"Uhhh… no." said Hyde.
"But Steven!" Jackie said.
"No." said Hyde.
"Yes!"
"No!"
"Yes!"
"No!"
"YES!"
"NO!"
"FINE!...pwease…" she said sticking out her lower lip.
"Fine." said Hyde .
"Okay then." she said smiling.
"Then let's go buy this thing." said Hyde, slapping her on the butt and walking out behind Jackie, who was giggling.
What do you think? Better? Or is it still to OOC. I really wanna know so please review and thanks for reading (:.