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Last time

They land in a little clearing and I hover above them, until they leave the clearing. I land and take off my jeans. I quickly tie them to me and transform to a wolf. I walk forward and I see them with Max on the ground with burns but still talking away. They all turned to me at the same time. Max jumped to her feet but swayed a little. I stepped up to them and saw there was another family there. The guy that looked like the father of them said "Hello, you're a new wolf aren't you? Edward will tell us your thoughts." I put my mind blocks up and speak with a deep growly voice "I can speak for myself. Who are you?""As I just told this young lady here, my name is Dr. Carlisle Cullen and this is my family. This is my wife, Esme, and my children, Edward, Rosalie, Emmett, Alice and Jasper. "He repeated. I nod, and say "You're not human are you?" "No, as I was just about to tell this little one here" he looked at Angel "We're vampires. But we only drink animal blood. In a way we are vegetarians.""Max, I can't read his thoughts." Angel says "He smells like an Eraser." Iggy mutters "He's a giant wolf, what do you expect?" Gazzy asks him."Max, are you ok?" Nudge asks her. Max slowly walks towards me. I stare at her, her eyes hypnotizing me. When she gets about a foot away from me she whispers "F-F-Fang?"

Max's POV

So I was sitting there about to ask WHY THE HECK Angel wanted to know what a vampire was, when everyone turned their heads towards the woods. That's when the smell hit me, like a monster truck. It. Was. Horrible. I turned my head as well; I saw a giant wolf standing there. I jackknifed to my feet but swayed. I looked the wolf directly in the eyes, waiting for it to make its move. I froze. Those eyes. Black eyes full of everything he was feeling, so deep and beautiful.

I could hear people talking, but I didn't pay attention. I slowly walk forwards towards the wolf. My body is killing me, but I keep walking. When I get close enough to touch him I stuttered "F-F-Fang?"

Angel gasped, and looked at the ground. I could tell she was close to tears. And this is Angel we're talking about here. I reach forward, but stop halfway. He rubs his head against my hand. His eyes flash with something that looked like pain and regret. He stares at me for a moment longer, then turns and runs off.

I feel tears stinging my eyes. I tightly close them wiling the tears to stop, but they start flowing. My head starts spinning, my whole body and soul hurt. I barely notice the body part though. After a year, I finally find him and he runs off? I sink to my knees, when did it stop raining? Well, now it's pouring again. I'm soaking wet, kneeling on the ground crying my eyes out. WOW, I am pathetic. And now I'm talking to myself. Wonderful! Note the sarcasm. Can I even stay sad for five minutes? I'm gonna shut up now and continue crying cuz I just feel like it. I fall over and curl up in a little ball, sobbing. I feel someone pick me up; I really don't care who it is right now. I lean into their chest balling. I see darkness covering my vision and before I know it, I'm out cold. Again.

Fang's POV

All I could think about was Max. Max Max Max Max Max. I ran back to the reservation, as fast as could. Which is pretty dang fast considering I'm a bird-wolf-kid. Like think about it! Wolf-kids run fast and bird kids run fast so sprinkle some salt and stir and you got yourself a faster than the speed of light mutant! Anyway…Back to the problem at hand. I can't stop thinking about Max! Let's see what to distract myself with. What was up with the pale dudes around them? Wait, back tracking. Dr. Pale-face said vampires. Vampires. I left them with vam-freaking-pires. He said vegetarian vampires. That really doesn't help here. Two percent bird-kids and all. I stop feeling someone running ahead of me. I smell the air…Seth. I pad forward, still wondering about the Cullen's. Seth runs into my sight and stops in front of me. "Dude! You went into the blood-suckers territory?" he panted

"Territory?" I ask

"Yeah, didn't anyone tell you about that whole thing?"

"Obviously not"

He quickly tells me the story ending with "And that's why we can't go into their territory."

"Well…they obviously didn't care, cuz I didn't get kicked off their property or whatever." I said as I walked away.

I cursed under my breath. I was headed back to Max. It started pouring again. That's when the smell hit me. It was kinda like the…the uh-Cullen's! Yeah, the Cullen's. But like I don't know more intense? You know what I mean. Well as I walked ran forward the smell became stronger.

I felt danger. I shouldn't be doing this, but I have to get to Max. I got this pang in my stomach. The flock's in trouble. I started running faster and faster, trying to get to them. I can smell blood. Oh no. I suddenly see a clearing, and in that clearing I just mentioned, I saw several what I'm assuming were vampires fighting with the flock. I searched through them, searching for any sight of the flock. I looked to the sky, but only saw Angel up there. I was relieved that at least she wasn't hurt. I continued my search. I finally saw a blonde head running between vampires only for them to blow up two seconds later. I saw Iggy fighting two at once he was holding pretty well. They weren't landing any blows, but neither was he. But I couldn't find Nudge or Max.

I heard someone coming up behind me. I quickly spun around ready to attack, but relaxed slightly when I saw it was Seth. I turned back around my eyes flicking back and forth. I finally spotted Max in the arms of the big vampire, Emmett? He was still fighting hard even holding her. Oh, I forgot to mention the Cullen dudes (and chicks) are fighting against the other vampires, too. So…back to looking for Nudge. I was turning my head this way and that, until I saw her darting around a small vampire. At first I thought she was a child but I got a good look at her and saw she was older. And also very freaking scary.

At first, Nudge appeared to be winning, until she hit the ground screaming and clutching her head. The vampires nearest her started surrounding her. "Nudge!" I burst out.

I bolted across the clearing, slashing at anyone in my way. When I finally reached the circle of death, I jumped in the middle of it. I sliced them, howling as loud as I could. Every single one of them looks taken aback. I internally grin, and rip them apart. Actually I just injured them enough to not get up. I picked Nudge up the best I could and dragged her over to where I had been just a few minutes before. I saw Seth still standing there bewildered. I lay her down, studying her. She had sweat and blood covering her body. She had bruises everywhere but nothing serious other than the fact that she's knocked out. "Seth," I mutter "I need you to change back and take Nudge somewhere where only I could find you. If she wakes up tell her you're a friend of mine. And if she doesn't trust you, or she won't stay with you talk to her about shoes and Justin Bieber. Got it?"

I jump back into the fight before he can answer. I'm going crazy, (literally) ripping them to shreds. I turn around only to see Emmett getting attack by at least five others. And in case you don't remember, he has Max. I quickly bound over to him, flickering in and out of visibility. I appear in front of the one he's focusing on. I knock him down and yell at Emmett "Go! Get Max away!" He nods and runs. Before I know it I'm pinned to the ground. I go limp, silently begging for them to fall for it. As soon as one of their grips loosens, I throw all of them off me and jump into the air. I go invisible and change to a human (human/bird) and throw out my wings. I see everyone on the battlefield looking for me. I smirk and throw on my jeans. I fly to Angel and almost incoherently whisper "Tell the flock and the Cullen's jump into the air on my count. Which you will project into their heads. K?"

She nods. I start descending downward. I'm quickly gaining speed. I start at ten. I count down slowly, and right as I'm about to reach the ground I turn visible. I hear a couple of them gasp, but I scream "NOW" as my fist hits the ground. I think I shattered every bone in my right arm, but it was worth it because the earth a jutted up around me knocking some down and simply swallowing others. I fall to the ground as well, but mine is because of exhaustion. I slowly sit up, trying not to puke. When I finally stand, I see the flock (minus Nudge and Max) and the Cullen's (minus Emmett). All of them staring at me open mouthed. Angel suddenly ran up and wrapped her arms around my waist. I looked at her questioningly. I saw she was crying. I bent down and scooped her up with my good arm, even though she was eight years old already. Then she whispered to me "I told them you would come back! I told them!"

I smiled at her, glad to have her back. I hugged her harder and said "I always will, Ange."

Soooo? How you like this chapter? I tried not to leave too big of a cliffhanger. Sorry it's so short but I didn't want to bundle it all into one chapter. So basically the next chapter will be everyone catching up, and after that unless I get another idea this will probably be over. Just FYI. And also before I go I just need to say that whatever questions you have about this (cuz I am fully aware it is confusing) just ask me about it and…REVIEW THE FLIPPING STORY! That's all I wanted to say. Thanks for reading! ~JAB