Right to start with: I profoundly apologize for the extensive delay. Truth is I've been questioning the tone of my story. I've realized one thing: this is a young adult's series (which is to say older children). And thus it is simply portrayed (by CP). However my spin on his work has become overly complex both in how it is written (a lot of people have complained on how hard the writing is to understand sometimes) and the psychological state of mind that I was planning on developing with some of the main character; some truly hideous characteristics that I was planning to incorporate. It felt as if I was tainting the purity of the cycle, if you know what I mean and destroying some well loved character (like the time Eragon kills a child in my story). This isn't to say that I am going to stop writing; I mean I already have the next two chapters written out. I am, however, taking some time to mould the future tone of this story before I continue to update. I may just start a new, easier to understand (so less poetic) with more childlike (fairy type) morals and ethics instead. Again sorry for the delay. On top of that college is a pain in the ass when it comes to updating fics.