Hi everyone, some of you are probably not very happy with me but to be honest I forgot all about this story and was going through to file I'd saved it on and remembered all about. So I got writing again and hope you like the first chapter.
Chapter1
DawnClan…
Heavy rain clouds slowly drifted over the sky, as a cruel wind whipped through the trees. Taking with it loose derbies of twigs and bark. Lightning flashed far away on the horizon, lighting the sky, closely followed by a loud crash of thunder. Heavy raindrops fell from the sky, covering the forest in a thick haze.
Whitekit whimpered and moved closer to the soft fur of her mothers pale grey belly, pushing her head into the thick long fur. The small ginger shape next to Whitekit twitched in her sleep, kicking Whitekit's ear with her back leg. Sneezing, she sat up and rubbed her paw over her ear, which was now tingling at the tip. She shook her white head and silently stepped over Goosefeather's thick grey tail stumbling over her own paws as she did so and landed on the hard sandy ground.
Stranding up on wobbly legs she shook the dirt from her now stained white coat. Looking around she realised she'd stumbled into the clearing where the rest of the clan went around on the daily business, but no it was disserted, all except for the shadowy figure near the entrance of the camp. Curiosity getting the better of her Whitekit scampered forward edging as close as she dared; she crouched low to the ground, half hidden under an overhanging of a bramble bush.
Dawn was approaching and the heavy rain clouds had past and were now small fluffy looking specks in the distance. Whitekit couldn't stay still for a moment longer and bunching her hunches under her she sprang at the cats back, or so she thought. Paws outstretched, they passed harmlessly through the air and she landed with a soft thud on the hard-packed ground, for the second time that day. The shadowy cat Whitekit leaped at jumped into the air when Whitekit landed next to it, caught completely unawares.
Whitekit leaped to her paws, her white fur standing up on her back until she looked like a small ball of fluff. Trying to sound like a warrior she growled at the intruder, but instead of sound fierce like she thought she did her words came out as a squeak. "What are you doing in Dawnclan's camp!"
The 'intruding' cat spun around and sat down licking a brown forepaw. "Whitekit! You scared me you little ball of fluff."
Whitekit's ear pricked forward when she recognised who's voice in was, "Bearpaw, what are you doing out here all alone! It's dark and scary at night."
Bearpaw flicked her tail like it was nothing, "I was just coming back from the dawn patrol, Ravenclaw and Flurryspots are already in the warrior's -." The sun was not just poking itself over the tops of the low trees when Whitekit herd her name being screeched from the nursery.
She dropped her head and said goodbye to Bearpaw over her shoulder as she made her was slowly over to the nursery, but bolted into a run when Goosefeather came screeching to a halt outside the nursery calling her name again. She came to a stand still when Goosefeather's usually kind blues eyes turner on her narrowing. "What have I told you about running off like that, don't do it again."
Riversplash came trotting out of the nursery, her belly bludging under the weight of her unborn kits. "Did you find her?" Her voice as frantic as Goosefeathers had been angry, but the grey she-cat just nodded and stormed off inside the nursery.
Whitekit followed suit and sat next to her sister, Robinkit, with her head hanging low. She knew what would come next; Goosefeather would go on to say what would happen if Whitekit had been carried off by a hungry owl or even by an intruding fox. "-I can't bare the thought of losing you, especially when you're still just a kit!"
Whitekit just nodded angrily, "I know I know, I've heard it all before."
"And yet you still test me!" Goosefeathers soft eyes narrowed again and this time she growled. "Fine, you can stay inside the nursery for the rest of the day. That means no going out and playing with the other kits and"-she turned around to look at the kits who had poked her head over their mothers bellies to listen-"no kits coming in here to play." She turned back to Whitekit. "Understood?"
Whitekit nodded and laid her head on her paws watching the other kits bolt outside to greet the new day and their mothers following them with less enthusiasm. Robinkit bounded up to her before she followed everyone else. "Don't worry, we'll find a way to get you out there with us, Goosefeather won't even notice you're gone."
So hopefully I'll have the second chapter up in a few days and we'll get to see if Robinkit and the others can pull off getting Whitekit out with them