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This is what happened; it's easier for me (the author) to tell you. Anyway, after the ThunderClan patrol found the kits, naturally they took them back to their camp. ShadowClan attacked, along with RiverClan. ShadowClan stole a kit and so did RiverClan. This is their story.

Hawkpaw POV

A dark brown tabby she-cat, her dark green eyes closed. Quickly opened her eye, her name was Hawkpaw, and she was a ShadowClan apprentice.

Hawkpaw yawned, stretching. "Get enough sleep, runt?" taunted a dark gray tom, his yellow eyes gleaming with anger.

Hawkpaw snarled, "Shut up, Stonepaw!"

Stonepaw licked a paw and said, "At least my mentor doesn't hate me."

"Because your mentor is a bee-brained fox-heart!" roared Hawkpaw, angrily.

Stonepaw led way out of the den, Hawkpaw slinking behind him. The ShadowClan camp was busy with activity; the deputy Eaglestrike was speaking to a group of warriors, the kits were wrestling in the dust, a few of the senior warriors were returning to camp with fresh-kill, and the elders were stretching out of their den.

But none of this mattered to Hawkpaw. All that mattered was that today was her assessment, and she could finally become a warrior! But, also taking the test was Stonepaw.

Stonepaw puffed out his chest, and he said, "You're never going to pass; you know that right, Hawkpaw?"

Hawkpaw bared her fangs.

Stonepaw jeered, "Ooh, I'm so scared! The runt is going to totally shred me!"

Hawkpaw bent low to the ground, back arched.

Stonepaw taunted, "I bet your kin are so messed up! No wonder you can't hunt, or fight!"

Hawkpaw lunged at Stonepaw, her claws outstretched, teeth bared in a snarl full of hatred. Her paw swiped at Stonepaw's head, claws grazing the flesh. Stonepaw let out a yowl of pain, and he growled and lunged at her. His claws dug into her shoulders, and she kicked out with her back legs. An explosion of pain fell from Stonepaw's stomach; but he sank his fangs mercilessly into Hawkpaw's shoulder.

Hawkpaw let out a shriek of pain. She squirmed from his grip and slashed out with her claws; she hit his face, claws grazing flesh and blood flying. Stonepaw sank his claws into her back leg. Suddenly there was a blur of black-and-white.

Splashstar, the black-and-white leader of ShadowClan, had pulled Stonepaw away. His deputy Eaglestrike (a big silver tom) had knocked Hawkpaw off her paws, pinning her down.

"You will not become a warrior if you fight like this!" spat Splashstar.

But Stonepaw met Hawkpaw's gaze calmly. "You fought well," his voice was deep and strange, not those of his own. Hawkpaw turned and saw a pale outline of a dark tabby behind them, with pale amber eyes.

What do you think of this chapter? Any names for Hawkpaw's brothers? Yes, they are males. I have made up my mind. The Clans in which they live in is ThunderClan and RiverClan. Who was the "pale outline of a dark tabby with pale amber eyes?"