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Whatever—here's the newest chapter.
Ravenpaw POV
Ravenpaw sniffed the air; his eyes narrowed. Why isn't the WindClan scent borders fresh? It's like they haven't been here…
"Hurry up, Ravenpaw!" yowled Brambletail, Ravenpaw's gray-white mentor. Ravenpaw ran after Brambletail.
Brambletail, along with Yellowfeather and Adderpaw, waited for Ravenpaw to dash up to them. Ravenpaw's neat, but odd, black tabby fur gleamed in the sunlight.
Adderpaw said, "Today we're going swimming in the Lake!"
Ravenpaw curled his tail happily, and said, "It's a great day to!" But the WindClan sent borders made him uneasy. Where are they?
But suddenly a flash of gray and Ravenpaw fell into the Lake. With a yowl of shock, Ravenpaw swam up and saw Adderpaw laughing down at him. "That'll teach you to pay attention!"
Though his pelt was burning with embarrassment, Ravenpaw began deep strokes towards the Island where the Clans would meet. He snuffled the air; and glanced over at WindClan territory. Instead of seeing dark shapes of cats chasing after rabbits, Ravenpaw only saw Twolegs scouting the land with long, pointed sticks and driving them into the ground.
Adderpaw swam over to him. He shook his pelt, splattering Ravenpaw. The mentors were on the bank, fishing.
"WindClan isn't here anymore," Ravenpaw finally said, interrupting the peaceful silence.
Adderpaw, licking his wet white paw, looked up with his cheerful green eyes. He flicked his long gray tail and said, "How can you be so sure?"
Ravenpaw felt like a burning fire was burning in his stomach, coursing through his veins. It set him uneasy; and he said, "I just know."
Adderpaw finished his grooming and he said, "I've never seen you like this. Maybe we could check at night!"
"What?" Ravenpaw gasped.
Adderpaw said, "Of course!"
"But tonight is the Gathering." Ravenpaw flicked his white-flashed black tail, and his amber eyes were troubled. We can't skip a Gathering! It's the sacred night of the Clans to meet! He stared at Adderpaw, who glared at him.
"We have to, though!" Adderpaw argued.
"No," Ravenpaw spat, and he turned around, leapt into the Lake, and swam back to shore, leaving Adderpaw behind him.
Later that night, as Darkstar led way towards the Island, Ravenpaw kept sending glances at the WindClan border. There were no dark shapes walking towards them; no scent of WindClan. Ravenpaw held his breath.
Tensions were going to be high.
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