Shar was in a happy mood,all the soldiers were ready and armed to the teeth whith various sabers,claymors,broad swords,rapiers,all the way to sgian dhus'
"all write my men,we march!" just then he stepped on a sharp piece of coral "bitch!" he said and grabed his sore paw there were snikers from the horde "Just march!"
as the horde of two hundred beast or so marched into the heart of mossflower and strait to Redwall!,
Drey was gathering twigs to make a fire,Riverwind was cooking some kind of soup,and Ryke was rubing bee's wax on his bow string
"so?" he started "how long till were at redwall?"
"a few days maybe more"
"Ssh,be quite" Drey said "i hear somethin'"
there was a raspy voice saying "well,looky' wat' we gots ere'!" a rat wearing rags apeared with severel other vermin
Drey reached for his Claymore "give us' ya vittles an' supplies an no one gets hurt see!"
"and if we dont?-
"Charge!" the rat bairly got through speaking the squirrel jumped into the mob of vermin swinging his Claymore a ferret and a stoat fell to his blade
Ryke notched one of his white tiped arrows,and let it fly he heard a scream,his arrow had took a weasel through his chest,
Severel vermin were about to rush Riverwind,a rat was about to raise his axe to her when she quikly unwound her whip and used it to grab the unfortunate rat's axe
she then fell apon the vermin flailing whith both axe and whip she took the vermin had the rat obiously there leader pined to a tree.
"please,please no killa me please"
"oh shut up!" the rat fell quite whith whimper "we wont kill you,but if you don't get out of my sight in ten seconds i will have my friend here make a pin cushion out of you".
He nodded to Ryke and he notched an arrow to his bow and nodded
"one,two,three-" Drey started counting the rat sped off never to be seen by in mossflower again.
all,three slept that night,peacefully unaware of the vermin horde of shar passing just a few miles past them...
okay,i know i have said that the chapters will be longer the next 2 or 3 will review please :D