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Chapter 11:
Thornfire's POV~
When I heard Rowangrass say those words, "Your father is dead," My mind spun. Somehow, I'd pictured my father as an unbeatable and invincible warrior. He was the ideal father, kind, loyal, brave and loving. To hear my father was dead...It broke me. Why couldn't I have been here to save him?
"How?" I asked quietly. When Fallenrain finshed explaining, I was overcome with sadness. it clouded my vision, and I barely saw Streamflower burst into tears and look at the stars. I knew she was asking them the question, though. She did this every time something happened. My vision cleared for a moment and I saw her stumble forward and I gasped. I opened my mouth to warn her, but it was too late. She tripped on a pebble and hit her head on a stone.
Oceanpaw broke through the crowd and tried to wake her. I pushed him away. "Get Silverpaw!" I yowled at him. He froze, and then nodded, running to the medicine den.
Silverpaw came running out a moment later. "Streamflower"! she cried, running to her. She gently nosed her and looked her over. "She has...a concussion, and we need to get her to the medicine den immediately."
Lightclaw stepped out of the crowd and carried Streamflower to the medicine den. As he was leaving, I saw him murmur something to Silverpaw that made her flush bright red.