Got this idea last night, and I just had to write it. I promise I won't write anything this short again!
Jareth paced in front of the goblins. "I am the Goblin King, and my backup needs to look good!" they all looked up at him with shiny eyes, finding it hard to believe that they had made it. "So show me what you can do!" with a loud cheer, the goblins ran to their places. "Hit it!" music flowed from the mirrored walls, filling them with energy. Jareth picked up his mic and started to sing.
"I saw my baby, crying hard as babe could cry. What could I do?" he spun to watch the goblins dance.
"No, no, no!" he cried, turning around again. "Hip swish, shuffle, kick, left ball change, THEN turn around!" Jareth demonstrated. The goblins all 'oohed' and 'aahed' and nodded at each other, then declared that they were ready to try again. Jareth gestured at the walls, and the music started again.
"My baby's love…had…gone…" Jareth gaped at the goblins tripping and falling all over the room. "You know what? I think I'll be the only one to dance…"
There's some things I need you to vote on in your review:
1. Which idea should I use next?
a) Jareth is a teacher at Hogwarts
b) Jareth learns to drive
c) Jareth goes shopping
2. On a scale of 1-10, how much do you like my story?
3. Which chapter was your favourite?
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k