I wrote a quick chapter. :) I will try to make them longer though!
Chapter 2
I can't believe we got a new apprentice and her mentor is the leader, Silkpaw thought.
"Silkpaw, go with the hunting patrol," Moonfur called. Silkpaw ran off to join the hunting patrol.
"Hiya, Silkpaw," Snowpaw meowed.
"Hi," Silkpaw mumbled.
"I can't believe that kit got her mentor as the leader. It's unfair!" Snowpaw mewed. Finally, someone who understands how I feel, Silkpaw thought.
"Come on, Silkpaw, the patrol is leaving," Snowpaw mewed. Silkpaw ran off to join Snowpaw and the patrol.
"I smell mouse and . . . starling," Silkpaw mewed as her mouthed started to water.
"Go to the Great Sycamore," Sparrowclaw meowed. Silkpaw flicked her tail and off she went.
Hey, I smell something familiar . . . Stormstar and Maplepaw! I'll get closer so I can hear them, Silkpaw thought. She scrambled through the bushes until she finally could catch some sounds.
"Okay, Maplepaw, this border divides RiverClan and ThunderClan," Stormstar meowed.
"Um . . . okay," Maplepaw mewed, shifting her paws. "Stormstar! It's Silverpool; she is having your kits," a voice mewed and paws of shuffling went.
"Practice your stalking while I'm gone," Stormstar meowed. Silkpaw was watching Maplepaw stalk. She is doing that all wrong, Silkpaw thought.
Finally she descended from the bushes and spoke.
"You're doing it all wrong! Watch me." She lowered her stomach a little above the ground and kept her tail almost touching the ground. Then she started stalking.
Maplepaw tried and she ended up doing the same.
When they caught some prey they raced back to camp and placed the fresh-kill in the fresh-kill pile. "Let's see Stormstar's kits," Silkpaw mewed.