Pen:Man people really like this story...
Fred (The voice in my head):Well I think it sucks
Pen:FRED WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU ABOUT INSULTING ME
Fred:You know your yelling at your self right...
Pen:Shut-up-Fred and I don't own hnkna
He lead me into a garden with roses every where.
"Elliot who is that young miss"
I looked.
There was a man with deep black hair
white jacket and pants and a hat that had roses and
cards in it.
"This is Kate the new foreiner"
The man walked over to us and took my
hand and kissed it.
"Nice to you meet Miss Kate"
"N-N-Nice to meet you ..."
"Blood my name is Blood"
"Well nice to meet you Blood"
"Would you like some tea"
"Sure"
He lead us to a long table with all kind of food on it.
"Elliot go finish the paperwork"
"Yes Blood..."
Elliot looked sad to leave but he did any way.I
watched him walk into the mansion.
"Might I say you have a very unusaul hair color"
I snapped my head back at him.
"T-T-Thank you"
"Is it natural?"
"Yes and I would like it if you stop asking questions"
"What if I don't want too"
Pen:OOOOOOHHHHHH A cliffhanger! and please review