Me: hey I would have had this up awhile ago but we had a tornado touchdown when I had study hall so yeah I never got to finish it and I had some good ones going to. So here is what I have.


Nagi felt something cool and wet against his forehead. He was lying on something soft and something was pressing down on him. He opened his eyes and looked around. He was lying in his room, his mother was placing a cool wet towel on his forehead. He had tons of blankets piled on top of him.

"How are you feeling?" his mother asked, watching him through worried eyes. "Why didn't you tell me you weren't feeling well?"

"I feel fine now." he said. "What happened?"

"You collapsed on the floor." his mother said smoothing out his hair. "You're running a really high fever. I called the school and told them you were sick."

"Wait how long have I been asleep?" he asked sitting up. He became dizzy but he shook his head and looked at his mom.

"Well it's 2:30 now so about 23 hours." she said counting the hours. "You came to every now and then but not for very long."

"But…but." Nagi couldn't think. What was he complaining about? He didn't like school. And he wouldn't get far behind for missing one day. And he could call his friends to see what he missed. "Ok." he said lying down.

"Call me if you need anything." she said opening the door.

"Kay." he said as he suddenly remembered. "Hey, Mom, who screamed?"

She looked at him confused. "No one screamed Nagi." she replied. "You were probably imagining things."

"Yeah probably." Nagi said. As soon as she shut the door he turned to Rhythm and Temari who were hovering by his head. "Did one of you scream?"

"None of us screamed." Temari whispered.

"Someone screamed." Nagi said. "She asked me not to leave her again."

"No one said anything man." Rhythm said. "Get some sleep."

Nagi laid back closing his eyes. He knew he had heard the girl's voice but couldn't put a name to it. "Oh well." he thought. "It doesn't matter."

"When do you think he'll wake up?" a voice said somewhere above me.

"How dare he sleep in the presence of his king!" an outraged voice said. Nagi groaned, that was Kiseki's voice.

"Calm down Kiseki." came Tadase's voice. "He's sick."

"I'm not sick." Nagi said his voice dry. He sat up and looked at them. Amu was sitting on the side of his bed with all the guardian characters around her head. (A/N Kusu Kusu, Ran, Dia, Miki, Sue, and Kiseki) Great Rima was here as well. He looked towards the door, Tadase was standing there with Rima next to him. She looked away the moment their eyes meet. Nagi glared at her before turning his attention to Amu who was speaking to him.

"Are you feeling any better Nagi?" she asked placing her hand against his forehead. It was cold and felt good against his hot forehead. He leaned away and smiled.

"Yeah." he laughed. "I'm fine. I guess I just refused to wake up this morning."

"It's not funny Nagi." Amu scowled. "Your mom said you had a very high fever and collapsed on the floor."

"She was worried about you all day." Tadase said. He turned his head to the side before continuing. "You still don't look to well what exactly happened?"

Nagi sighed. Amu worried about everyone easily. He saw Rima out of the corner of his eye watching him. "I ran home and started my dance practice like I told you guys. Well I kept messing up and took a break. Answered a text message and then that's all I remember."

"That's all nothing else." Tadase pressed. Nagi narrowed his eyes what else where they talking about.

"Yeah other then I had a hallucination that's it." Nagi said. "And even then it wasn't anything. Just someone screaming,"

"Just, someone screaming?" Amu said. "But who screamed?"

"No one, that's why it's called a hallucination." Nagi replied.

"So you went crazy before fainting?" Rima said. "Anything else you want to tell us?"

"If you didn't want to hear why did you ask?" he snapped at her.

Amu stood up suddenly and grabbed Tadase's hand. "We'll go get you something to drink." And they left before either one of them could protest the guardian character following them.

"Great." mumbled Nagi. "Leave me with the psychotic clown."

"What!" Rima yelled. Nagi clutched his head; it began pounding the moment she yelled. He let out a moan and put his head on his knees. "Nagi!" Rima gasped. He felt warm hands on his shoulders and pressure on the bed next to him. "Nagi what's wrong?"

"Quite yelling." he snapped.

There was a pause before she answered. "Sorry." she whispered. "I won't yell, please don't be mad."

Nagi looked up and faced her. Their faces were only inches apart. He blushed but didn't move back. Rima was staring at him her eyes wide. Nagi noticed that her eyes were a beautiful amber color and that strands of her hair had fallen in front of her eyes. Her face was smooth and pale, her breath was warm as she breathed out. Her fingers were small but strong where they laid against his skin. (A/N he's were a black tank top and jeans.) His heart began pounding widely in his chest. He closed his eyes briefly before opening them. She was staring at him her eyes betraying the confusion in her face. He raised a hand to the side of her face and leaned closer feeling her breath on his lips warm and sweet.


Me: Hi, hows the third chapter. Personally I like the ending. What will happen. Will they kiss? Will they not? Let me know what you think.