Okie dokie. I know what you are thinking. Rat, how could you? Well, I am honestly sick to my teeth with this story. It's not an original idea (I got the idea from an image of an eyeless Rarity), the story felt really horrible to write, and I felt my discriptions and such were horrid. You know, that "Spike said, X-ing as he Y-ed.
I wanted to end this story ASAP, So I went for a half-assed ending. A few hours later, I get a comment, from an "Ichiryu No Meiyo". For easiness sake, I will now refer to him/her as Mayo. Why? Because. Anyway, first Mayo commented on my half assed approach to the , I do wish I had the strength to finish the story. To give it a solid plot. To make it my first propper work where I didn't rage quit. But... needless to say- I failed.
So, mayo then got an idea- take it into his/her own hands. Mayo asked could (s)he do it herself. Quite frankly, I was surprised someone cared enough to attempt to fix my uppity litter... ature.
So, I agreed. So, please disregard that last chapter. Now I am not sure the story will be re-written fron scratch, taken over from chapter four and three quarters, or whatever else. I am not sure if it will be on my account, or Mayo's, or god knows. I have no idea ATM. But you get the picture. I guess I will be content writing creepy little horror pips, rather than full on stories.
Well, in any event, keep your ears open, and thank you for giving this 3500 views when it was in my care(lessness). Mayo will probably make this go far. I wish our friend good luck.
Though, checking her profile, she seems to be one of those few authors who can write pretty well. Though, is "Conspiratorially" even a bleeding word? Sounds Cromulant. See what I did there? Hah,
Brilliant!
TL'DR
My ending never happened.
I am giving this to Mayo.
I will write small horror and smut fics from here on in.
Thanking Mayo for wanting to do that
Thanks for reading.
Goodbye