Well, if I can try to make chapter 2 good, it needs to be good. And I knw CLake, will review this chapter after it's finished. But trust me on this. And I really have a feeling that after this story is done, someone else will remake this to become better. And I will accept someone like Flores to remake this. But make sure you put me in as a based on this. And for now, enjoy chapter 2.
After a couple of minutes of walking by 30 trying to get home. You were starting to get tired and feel the pain a bit on your injured leg, and was needed for a bandage around your leg. So you had to make a sound so she can hear what your doing.
(Y/N): (Groans in pain, and whimpering) My leg still hurts from that fall I took 30 minutes ago, and it really hurts. (sobbing)
Commando Zoey: (calm) Ah kid, I am still sorry that your leg is still broken. But it is a good thing that I have a medical kit with me if any poor, innocent animals are hurt. But it is a good thing that you are the one who need bandages because of your leg being broken. Do you think you can lay here for the rest of the night so I can put bandages on you? Please?
(Y/N): (Whimpering) Hmm mmm. I wan this pain to go away. (So she puts you down on the ground carefully, and took out her medical kit so she can try to put the bandage around your injured leg. And by the time she finished wrapping the bandage around your leg. It was now making you feel better and cooling you off.)
Commando Zoey: (calm) There, better?
(Y/N): Much better. But I still miss my parents. (sobbing)
Commando Zoey: (Y/N), (Y/N), we will get back to civilization for a while. But don't cry kid, don't cry. (She begins to stroke your hair trying her best to make you calmed down. And by a minute, you starting to calm down. And for a second you asked Zoey something that can help you to sleep.)
(Y/N): Zoey? I want to ask you something.
Commando Zoey: (Calm) Hmm? And what is it that you want help with (Y/N)?
(Y/N): Can you help me get put to sleep please? I need someone to put me to sleep for the night. Do you think you can put me to sleep please?
Commando Zoey: (calm) Ok, but I need to inform you that I know how to put them to sleep hypnotic style.
(Y/N): Why hypnotic style Zoey? Are you going to try to hypnotize me to sleep using your eyes, or your words?
Commando Zoey: (calm) Oh, just words. I know the instructions about how to put someone to sleep and relax.
(Y/N): But I don't know if I can handle it, but the sounds will distract me if you do this. (sounds came from nowhere) Agh! (Hugs Zoey) See? (scared) See what I mean? Those sounds will scare ne because I am scared. (cries on Zoey's shoulders making it wet and she doesn't care if you get her shoulders wet, she cares about you trying to stay calmed and relaxed, so she hugs you tight, and strokes your hair slow and smoothly.)
Commando Zoey: (calm, and smiles) Hey, take it easy kid. It may make you scared. But if you can try taking deep breaths. I might help your feeling of calming down. Ok?
(Y/N): Hmm mmm.
Commando Zoey: (calm, smiles) Now take a deep breath kid. Breath in. (you took a deep breath) And out. (and breathes out.) Now take more deep breaths and feel something happening through your body. (you are still taking deep breaths as something very strange is happing through your veins, making it, tired) Your veins are feeling something strange happening as it begins to make your arms very tired, so very tired indeed, and if you take a couple more deep breaths, you are starting to feel your eyelids going heavy. So heavy, as it begins to make you sleepy. And making you very sleepy, means it is taking you into a hypnotic slumber. And your ears are starting to blind every sounds you hear except for the one who is talking to you. And the one who is speaking through your mind, is causing you to make your mind saying sleep and relax. Relax your self as you take more deep breaths. And when I count to from 5 to 0, you will smile in front of me and will listen to what you need to do. Ok, ready? (you nodded your head up and down meaning you are indeed, ready)
Commando Zoey: (calm, smile, echoing through your mind) Ok, 5: You are feeling fine, but beginning to get a bit tired. 4: You are now getting a bit more tired and feeling your eyes forcing you to keep them shut. 3: You are now starting to get very tired and want's your eyelids to close and stay shut. 2: You are now getting sleepy. 1: You are now getting a lot sleepy now, and closed your eyelids very shut and secured. 0: You now go limb and is now completely sleepy and started to slide off of her smooth, sweet, hot and sexy skin as you began to get to the cold dry ground. (but she was managed to grab you and decided that she might want to hold you tight in her pajamas, so by the time you wake up, you will indeed see her in her PJ's and see that you really are sleeping with the girl you believed is hot) (But she is still with Mike, and you are too young to find love.)
Commando Zoey: (calm) Now, I better changed to my PJ's and sleep next to him to sleep and cuddle with. He does indeed need love, and warmth to keep him safe. (So she carefully put you on the ground and changed into her PJ's but she is still wearing the bandana, and black war paints on her still. Meaning she is still in commando mode. But she managed to hug you into her arms and put your head onto her chest so you can hear her heart pumping. Making you even more relaxed)
Commando Zoey: (calm) Good night (Y/N), we will continue tomorrow morning when both of us are completely awake. (then she kisses your forehead, making you smile when she kissed your forehead, and she went to sleep by your side, and tucked in her blanket)
And by next morning, you were waking up from the trance you got hypnotized from, which made you kept under her spell for the whole night. And when you notice you are wrapped up around Zoey's arms and laying on her chest. You were blushing from her warmth chest, which made it a cuddle with a single heart beat. And notice, you are looking at Zoey wearing her PJ's and notice her underwear is purple, and you know another word which you can't say in front of her that will not do. So you kept it quiet to yourself for a long time. And when she was starting to wake up from your movement, she can really feel your head moving making her wonder if you are looking at her underwear. And when she woke up, man is she jealous of what your doing.)
Commando Zoey: (calm) Kid, are you looking at my underwear?
(Y/N): Y-Yes I am. Why?
Commando Zoey: (calm) Well, your making me, kind of blushed from you looking at my underwear.
(Y/N): And well, I was almost want to see your butt when you are sleeping, but you are awake so...
Commando Zoey: (calm, blushed) So I guess that's too late then to see my butt. (she is getting up from the ground and you notice what your going to say)
(Y/N): I guess that if you are walking to the tree, I guess I can see your butt when are going trying to hide behind the tree to change right?
Commando Zoey: (calm) Well y-yeah, I guess so then. (she smiles at you and starts to walk to the tree to get behind, and you can see her butt making you blush red all over your face completely, and when she was completely invisible right behind the tree to change back to her original clothes, you notice that something bad is going to happen if anyone doesn't stay with you, and a sudden hiss is heard, making you turn your head, seeing a big snake who is hungry for breakfast)
(Y/N): (gasps) S-S-S-S-Snake! Please, don't eat me! (You begin to walk backwards and the snake was slithering forward slowly. And you called for Zoey's help and you are running to Zoey. But the snake suddenly starts to attack you by biting your shoulders, making you scream in pain and wrapping you up very quickly, and starts to constrict, and squeezing you to death. And was managed to call for her help in a crying tone)
(Y/N): (crying) Z-Z-Z-Zoey, help me please. (squeezed in pain and crying harder) ZOEY! HELP! I AM BEING SQUEEZED AND BEING EATEN ALIVE BY THE BIG SNAKE! (And when you cried so hard, she gasped and was finished putting her clothes on, and she had to hurry before your eaten with an angry look on her face making her angry from what you said)
Commando Zoey: (angry) Don't worry (Y/N)! I am coming to help you! (the snake almost have you lose your entire air, and you are crying so hard from the snake's powerful squeeze, and with that last big squeeze and your last breath, you were out cold with a tear coming out of your eye, and when the snake opens it's mouth and was about to eat you out cold, Zoey's voice made the snake stopped and turn it's head to see her.)
Commando Zoey: (angry) Hey you! Leave that innocent kid alone! (The snake heard her voice and starts to attack her with it's coils, but she was able to use it to leap on them and jump on it's tail, making her hold her fist in front of her and is going to attack the big snake!) AAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!
And she punched the snake in the face making it fall to the ground, making you fall out of it's coils, and right to the ground in pain and the snake start's attacking her. The snake was able to wrap Zoey up and squeezing her a bit, but she bits it's coils and frees her with the snake in pain. But the snake was chocked by Zoey's hand, squeezing it so tight and puts it into her face and the snake was in fear and it got close to Zoey's angry commando face gnarling her teeth to make it more terrifying.)
Commando Zoey: (angry, rage, scary) Now you listen here snake! I am not going to let you eat that innocent child I am taking home to, and you are not going to get near that kid when I am around! And if I see you again, I wear tear your limbs apart and feed it to the other animals that will eat it! GOT IT!? (the snake nods it's head up and down in fear) Good! NOW GET LOST YOU KID EATER! (She throws the snake to the ground and slithers away in fear, and never returned again. But when the snake slithers away from her, she gets to you, and was able to hold you, and with some bones snapped in you, it will take a while for those bones to heal.) (sad, calm) Kid. Kid. Wake up. I am right here. Please. (puts her head on your forehead) (whispers) Please, don't leave me with a dead child. Please, wake up. (And you started to cough, making her surprised from it. And you started to cry a little bit from the squeeze and when you open your eyes, they were red from the squeeze, and the tears.) Kid, your ok.
(Y/N): (crying) Zoey, I was attacked from the snake and almost ATE ME ALIVE! (You cried hard and hugged her with your arms around her, but the pain of the bones inside you that was snapped, she hugs back with the sad look on her face.)
Commando Zoey: (calm, sad) Hey, hey kid. Don't cry. Don't cry. I am right here, right here what I want you. I am very sorry that I left you on the ground, I shouldn't kept you close what I want you to be.
(Y/N): (crying, hiccupping) B-B-But why didn't you just looked at me for a couple of seconds t-t-t-then? That would've b-b-been easier then. (You continued to cry hard and she stroked your hair, and hugged you tighter just to make you calmed down.)
Commando Zoey: (calm, sad) Shh. Shh. It's ok, it's ok. your fine. But I know your bones are snapped a bit, but I am still going to take you home.
(Y/N): (Crying a little bit) But how? How am I going to, if I don't know how keep standing with out anyone to make me keep my balance? (and that made the idea hit in her head, knowing what can make you keep your balance.)
Commando Zoey: (calm) Well, it is a good thing I brought a cane with me, incase my leg is broken, or Chester needs it to keep his balance. I think that might be useful for you, (She picks you off the ground and give you the cane. And you were able to hold your balance, but you slipped a bit, and she hold you behind her hand. And got you back on your feet. And made you smile and calmed down in find dandy.)
(Y/N): Thank you Zoey.
Commando Zoey: (calm) Your welcome friend. (You and Zoey became friends very quickly when you and Zoey met last night at the cliff you fell. And you and Zoey starts to continue walking home with all the stuff on her back.)
Well then, that is what happens if a snake tries to take you unexpected. But your warrior friend was able to save you from the snake's clutches but with the cane your holding. It will be reasonable for you to hold on to without any trouble caused. So make sure you think this might be good, or something. Review this, and stay tuned for chapter 3. So for now, see you in the next chapter. Peace!