Oh. My. God.
This is horrible. I can't believe I wrote this—okay, maybe I can, it's just horrible. Tsuna is so...panicky. Especially on the last few chapters and Haru is just...Haru is ridiculous. (The only thing I like about this is my dear, dear Fuutsu. I think I'll keep her.)
Okay, so, I read the thing with fresh eyes as I really can't remember anything about it. And I must say…I am really getting old. I think. I'm nineteen, I wrote this when I was seventeen or eighteen and I know that doesn't seem very long but a lot of shit happened in all that time and I just don't think I'm in the right mental state to continue this.
School Trip Vongola Style is stupid, immature and just ludicrous.
But I remember feeling really great when writing this. It has sentimental value, and I really love how kind you guys are in the review although—gosh, this is really awful, I can't believe you guys liked it! I may just be really hard on myself, but, meh.
So. This needs a major overhaul.
I don't have much time to write as I have a lot of classes this semester, but I always find time for my obsessions. So…I guess I want to edit.
I never really did that before, or ever, so maybe that's why it turned out so argh.
Anyone want to help? Haha.
Okay. On to editing.
I'm sorry there won't be chapters for a while.
PS. Some little birdie was disappointed about this fic being 'cross-over' because of that Sasuke-Sakura part. I actually liked that arc because I just luuuurve Hibari, but I see his/her point. I'm sorry. This isn't really crossover though. They were just making a cameo. I'm sorry, again, if you were disappointed.
I hate disappointing people.
I'll try not to.
Yosh. Tata!