A/N- long author's note at the end.

Eric-Well that was easier than I thought. I chuckled loudly. Not one of my best but it had caused some damage, which was better than nothing. A simple prick in Christina's neck with the latest mind controlling serum and a temporary memory loss one in Fours and well, look at the outcome. Another laugh shook through my body. Oh this just got better and better.

Eleanor-I saw the whole thing. Eric the creep injected Christina with a serum of some sort whilst his tacky girlfriend worked her way around Four's defences to get to his neck. Next thing I knew Christina and Four were making out! Just when things couldn't get any worse Tris walked in and caught them in action, she turned on her heels and pushed her way into the crowd behind her. The gasp that escaped my mouth was loud enough to catch Paula's attention. She walked toward me in the dark cupboard I had been concealed in, a dangerous look crossing her face. Out of the corner of my eye I saw Christina's iron, hrm that should do enough damage. I swiftly pulled the iron and swung it into Paula's face, jerking her head to the side from the force. She stumbled backwards and I took this as my chance to leave, I had to find Tris but first I had to loose Eric.

Tris- I slid down one of the walls in the dark corridor, pulling my knees into my chest and letting the sobs escape my throat. How could two people you love the most hurt you in ways barely imaginable? How?
My breath caught in my throat as I replayed the scene in my head. I was officially broken.

Eleanor-I sprinted down the corridors until I reached the one I was familiar with as Tris & Fours, I pounded on the door looking nervously over my shoulder. Where was Tris and where was Eric?! I'd lost both of them but surely Tris should be here and Eric should be smart enough to know this was the first place I'd come. I hammered on the door until I heard a horrible sound. A strangled sound that could only mean sadness. I followed the sound to a dark corridor where I saw her small figure. Petite, frail and weaker than I'd ever thought I'd see her. She was tormented; I had to put her out of her pain.

"Tris, open your eyes" I shook her shoulders gently "Tris look at me!"
Her tear filled blue eyes found mine as another sob escaped her throat.

"Eleanor there's nothing you can say, I know what I saw" she whispered, her voice full of pain.

"TRIS! We don't have time! Eric and Paula were behind it all, some kind of serum. Look, Four and Christina didn't know what they were doing, I promise you. Now please, you need to believe me, Eric and Paula saw me and now I don't know what's going to happen. Please just come on!" The words rushed out of my mouth as I desperately tried to get her to believe me. Her eyes widened at my words before her face fully composed. She stood up, wiped the tears on her cheeks away and brushed her hands on her jeans. She looked me in the eye, sadness replaced with determination.
"I appreciate what you've done Eleanor and don't worry about Eric, I've got him covered". She sprinted down the corridor before I could respond. She truly was dauntless.

Tris-I should have known Eric had something to do with this, he was determined to make my life miserable. That was about to change. The sadness I felt just moments ago had twisted and contorted itself in to anger, pure rage. No longer was Eric going to put me or my husband in any form of danger. I had a vague idea of where he would be, I slowed as I walked up to my apartment and saw the door slightly ajar. I was right. I pushed the door open, allowing it to bang against the wall. Was there any point in being subtle? My muffled footsteps seemed a thousand times louder in the disturbing silence. I walked into the living room, immediately finding him sprawled out on my settee.

"Tris, what a pleasant surprise. How are you" the sarcasm in his voice repulsed me.

"How dare you Eric" I spat the words at him "how dare you think you can put mine and my husbands relationship in jeopardy. You truly are a heartless bastard yet I somewhat feel pity for you"

"I don't want your pity" he snapped, his fingers twitching in agitation.

"Oh but we both know you do, because deep down we both know your nothing but an attention seeking, little boy"

As soon as the words were out my mouth Eric leaped forwards. I moved out of the way, letting him stumble past me. That was when I heard it, the sound vibrating around me. A gun shot. I didn't know who fired or was shot until I turned around.
Tobias stood in the door way and Eric lay on the floor, a bullet wound in his forehead.
I looked back up to Tobias. The gun dropped from his hands.
"Tris" he whispered, his voice strained.

A/N hrm, not too sure on this chapter so I apologise if it doesn't satisfy you. Please don't be thinking Christina's a slut:-( I know that's how her characters been portrayed so far but she's not guys:-(

Secondly, I'd just like to say thank you for all the amazing reviews, its so motivational to read, it quite literally does make my day:-)

Thirdly, couldneverdreamtobebetter of course I'll marry you, you like How I Met Your Mother!;-)

So overall just a big thank you really:-)

P.S here's a quote I saw today and well, just thought I'd share it with you'se if you haven't already heard it.

"Darkness cannot drive out darkness: only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate: only love can do that." ― Martin Luther King Jr.

lots of love Courtney.