Mention to my 100th reviewer in my next chapter:-)!

Tris-

I tilted my head from side to side, stretching out all the tensions embedded under my skin. Kat lay in the chair, her face composed but the fear in her eyes shining bright.

"You'll be going under in around 60 seconds" Tobias spoke calmly "remember its just a stimulation".

Kat nodded and Tobias sat in the seat next to mine, connecting the wires to his head. I put my hand in his and watched as Kat's fear materialised around her. Water lapped over her face, knocking her head backwards and pushing her further into the dark depths of her own personal hell. She struggled to swim to the top of the black ocean she was consumed in but still she went further under, loosing any sense of direction she once had. She silently screamed, water filling her mouth taking away the last of air left in her lungs. Of course realistically Kat would have been dead but being a stimulation the torment carried on. Kat was pulled further down, her body absorbing more and more water until her eyes became glassy and empty. She jerked up in the chair, spluttering and coughing. I smiled comfortingly at her and went to help her up. Her knees trembled and I remembered my first stimulation, the ravens attacking me. I repressed a shudder and offered to walk Kat back to the dormitories. She nodded shakily and grasped my arm. As soon as we had entered the room she slid down a wall, pulling her knees into her body and tucking her head into her own safety, as I used to only a few years ago.

"The first stimulation is always the hardest" I placed my hand gently on her shoulder.

"I ca- I can't" she muttered, still shaking "I can't do this six".

I was suddenly filled with sympathy, I knew her pain but I also knew she needed to be pushed.

"I promise you, you can" her eyes met mine, searching for a hidden lie. "Being dauntless is not having no fears, it's about facing them".

Her eyes searched mine once more before she pulled herself off the floor.

"Six, I'm scared" I saw she genuinely was but I was still her instructor.

"I know"

I sighed silently before turning around and walking out of the room.

Kat-
Why was this so hard? Why was Six being so difficult? I needed to talk to someone who had done this. I let the tears fall silently down my face. Dauntless initiation truly was mentally and physically challenging. I wiped away the tears as the doors opened and Rhianna and Luke walked in, oblivious to me lying on my top bunk. I made no sudden movements, not wanting to draw attention to myself. Luke was so attractive; although I hadn't admitted it to anyone I had a thing for him. His green flecked eyes studied Rhianna's face as she laughed at some remark he'd made. I felt a sudden pang in my stomach; I knew the feeling though I hadn't felt it often. Jealousy.

"You're so strong, you shouldn't get yourself worked up over stimulations" he took her hand gently "it's not real" he said soothingly.

"Thank you Luke" Rhianna barely whispered, before I could acknowledge what was happening they were KISSING! I jumped off my bunk, jarring my ankles but still I ran. I pushed in between them and ran straight out of the dormitories, knocking Candy over on the way who made some snide remark I didn't catch. I hated her! I hated him! I ran, not knowing where I was going until I saw the doors leading to the pit. I slowed my pace to a walk and gulped. I walked forwards until the rail over chasm was in my palms. Life. Simple and precious, fragile even. The water crashed menacingly up the rocks reminding me of my fear stimulation today.

"Kat"

I knew the voice at once though I didn't turn around, Rosie.

"Kat, please don't do anything stupid"

Her voice was strained. My delicate twin, my sister who had moved to dauntless because of me; my sister who truly belonged in amity. I heard faint footsteps then felt the pressure of her hand in mine.

"Kat, open your eyes and look at me"

It was only then I realised I had closed my eyes, I did as she said. Staring into the soft brown eyes I loved.

"It's hard, honestly I know but I'm here. We have each other and together we can get through this"

That was all I needed to hear to feel comforted. Of course I could rely on Rosie; she was my baby sister only by a minute but nevertheless.

"Together"

I squeezed her hand before pulling her into a hug. Faction before blood? I don't think so.

A/N Hey hey; hows life for you guys? So thanks for all the reviews, RosieA I read your review and it's a good idea going into the initiates and their perspective but I accidentally wrote Kat instead of Rosie so I just sort of kept it that way, hope you don't mind too much.

Any ideas for the initiates? Who gets with who, who hates who, who kills who? Suggest anything, honestly your reviews make me smile and I love it when they make me laugh so go for it, put anything:-)

I am planning on writing a superrrr long chapter just for you'se and I will get round to it, promise. Sincere apologies for the shortness of them so far, don't hate me too much;-)

goodnight & god bless from the UK.