Hello guys, I'm back …. & Today I knocked here with Results of
*****"ADITYA SRIVASTAVA Poetry Contest"****
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Once again I want to say thanks to all participants who wrote beautiful birthday poems for ADITYA SIR & a big thanks to readers, who rated all poems in review section or in PM box. Special thanks to Judges for their feedback on all entries.
Thanks to all :)
All entries were so good & writers did a great job but as we all know this is a contest so there would be one winner of this Poetry Contest. So let's see what the Judges says about all entries.
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All participants did a fantastic job .We got to know, neither of them are as professional poet but still we found fluency, enthusiasm , freshness , beauty in their poems. Well done kids You really impressed us. All poems were good as we could not expect professionalism in your poems but still some poems hints us written by poetic brain giving an excited feeling to read & rate . However there is no specific rule or system to judge poems or how a poem should be written cause every reader responds to a poem in his or her own way but there are signs that indicate a poem is solid or successful in giving what it means, touching our hearts & express the vast & true meaning in less words . For a good poem, words selection is very important but it doesn't mean choosing difficult words giving a good impression. A good poem is a symptom of the author's effort to make sense of the object or topic given to write. Once again, Congratulation to all participants for their fantastic efforts.
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Entry 1—Very well written, describing the real aroma of birthday party , perfect words selection , laced with good rhythmic tone & adding celebrity name completes this poem. Your poetry does justice with the purpose of poetry and to the reader's expectations. A beautiful effort , Well done.
Thank you.
Marks - 37 / 40
Total obtained—37 + 10 = 47
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Entry 2—Nice attempt, adding CID characters is a good idea .Funny & dancing flavor like children birthday party. Simple words giving rhythmatical touch. Nice poem .
Thank you.
Marks – 33 / 40
Total obtained—33 +7 = 40
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Entry 3—A good try , words selection is easy & catchy giving a proper meaning like planning for a birthday party, lased with fun & energetic rhythm .Your poetry has little hip hop touch, the occasion is well described but missing hint of celebrity . Good poem , keep it up.
Thank you.
Marks—34 / 40
Total obtained—34 + 7 = 41
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Entry 4—A very sweet poem , seems a beautiful bouquet of wishes , short but effective. Nice words selection, impressive too, your poem is beautiful but not mentioning the celebrity stole the perfectness in this poem. Still a very good effort, keep it up.
Thank you.
Marks—35 / 40
Total obtained—35 + 8 =43
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Entry 5—Well this is little complex . Author wrote poetry or what it was difficult to understand. Seems author telling a friendship story & in some places it's trying to catch its own rhythm. We tried to find a poetry in it but got confused finding a kind of note or message in ending of this poem . However this is a sweet attempt, showing affection for birthday guy , words selection is good , writer put his/her feelings in it. lovely try.
Thank you.
Marks—33 / 40
Total obtained—33 + 7 = 41
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Entry 6—Beautiful poem . This poem doing justice with its true purpose. Perfect words selection , decorated with sweet rhythm but not mentioning the celebrity seems lack of sugar in cake. Wonderful work.
Thank you.
Marks –35 / 40
Total obtained—35 + 8 = 43
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Entry 7—Wow..your poetry seems perfect in itself. Telling qualities of birthday guy in rhythmatic way giving a sweet feeling. Poem showing author's dedication & love. Words selection is good & impressive, adding celebrity name in your poem like extra chocolate in chocolate cake but you missed a very important ingredient, there is no hint of 'Birthday' & this is what the whole contest is about for. Overall a beautiful try.
Thank you.
Marks—34 / 40
Total obtained—34 + 8 = 42
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Entry 8—Good attempt. Deep meaning poetry like ocean, quiet but roaring too. "Pearl & Treat" really seems like a treat .Perfect words selection but missing the celebrity .Well , sweet one.
Thank you.
Marks—34 / 40
Total obtained—34 + 8 = 42
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Entry 9—Lovely poem. Full of love & happiness. Author put his/ her heart in this poem. Every line is deep & colorful showing affection. "Raat ki chandani mei dibokar , aur isse chamkana hai" these lines are deep & beautiful adding celebrity name completes your poem..Seems you got Parnassian style. Well , you wrote in mix language , Hindi & Urdu , you can use mix language in usual poems but if you are writing for a contest then you should pic one language. As a simple birthday poem this is really good .
Thank you.
Marks—33 / 40
Total obtained—33 + 8 = 41
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Entry 10—Sweet & lovely poem . Simple but beautifully giving birthday wishes especially "Your birthday gift chocolate , movies & car". Words selection is nice & easy. If you had added celebrity's name then the poem would have become even more beautiful . Good one.
Thank you.
Marks—33 / 40
Total obtained—33 + 7 =40
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All Participants did a great job. Well done.
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RD: Thanks to Judges for their feedback on all entries .
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Judges done their work & now time comes to announce the Results….
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Top Three Entries of This Poetry Contest are
Entry 1- By Dada(GD) …Total Marks – 47
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Entry 4- By MeowRK …..Total Marks – 43
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Entry 6- By UsernameDoesNotExist …..Total Marks—43
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The Entry got maximum marks is the "Winner Entry" of this contest &
Winner of " **ADITYA SRIVASAVA** Birthday Poetry Contest "
IS
Dada (GD) for Entry -1
""CONGRATULATION ***Dada(GD)***""
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Runner- up of Poetry Contest are
**MeowRK ** & **UsernameDoesNotExist**
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CONGRATULATION To
***MeowRK** & **UsernameDoesNotExist***
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Thank you once again to all the Participants & Readers & Judges.
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Always keep smiling friends & keep rocking.
R.D.