Wow, you guys are speedy. I better make my next review goal quite high. :/
Chapter 11
Annabeth, Reyna and Silena left the dorm room and went downstairs. Rachel, Katie, Beck, Travis and Conner were waiting.
"They're coming shopping with your mom?" Reyna asked pointing to the boys.
Silena played with a piece of black hair. "Well, Charlie promised me he would meet my mom and Travis and Conner…what are you doing here?"
"We're meeting someone at the mall," Connor shrugged.
"Who?" Katie raised an eyebrow. Her brown hair was down and she wore a white sundress.
Travis answered, "A guy we met online. He's going to finalize our plans for New Year's."
"O…kay," Rachel's curly red hair shaded her face. "Well, let's go meet your mom at the mall."
Ten minutes later they arrived at the mall. It was around eleven. Travis and Connor went off. They soon found Aphrodite at a beauty shop. She was this woman whose beauty was hard to describe. She smiled at her daughter. "So, Silena, are you going to introduce me to your friends?"
Silena nodded, "This is Annabeth, Reyna, Katie, Rachel and my boyfriend, Charlie."
Aphrodite smiled at everyone. "It's nice to meet you all. So, I thought I'd treat you to the mall…"
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Travis and Connor walked into the game shop and walked towards the Manga. This is where they had agreed to meet the friend they had made online. They saw the guy in the corner. He wore a yellow t shirt, suspenders and shorts. He had curly brown hair and elfish features.
"Sorry we're late," Connor apologized.
The kid smiled, "It's no problem. So, what can I help you with?"
...
"Annabeth, I think you'd look gorgeous with shoulder length hair," Aphrodite commented. Aphrodite dragged them into a barber shop. Beckendorf looked especially nervous. He'd been trying to please Silena's mother all day.
Silena grinned, "I agree."
Annabeth shrugged from the barber chair. "Okay." Her hair was pretty long, about waist length. For some reason, she felt like the old Annabeth wouldn't cut it.
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Bianca smiled as a group walked in. There were seven of them and after talking with the man they came towards Bianca and Hazel.
"Hi," Bianca held up her camera. "My name is Bianca and I'll be your photographer today. And this is my assistant Hazel."
Hazel gave a wave.
A tall woman stepped forward. "My name is Aphrodite. This is my daughter and her friends."
They all waved.
Hazel began to put them in position. But when she got to the blonde she stopped.
The girl frowned, "What?"
Hazel looked back at Bianca who was busy on a laptop. "Bianca."
Bianca turned around.
"Doesn't she look like An…?"
Bianca stared at her. "Yeah," she finally said.
"But she would never cut her hair that short."
"She's dead, Hazel." Bianca turned back to the laptop. "We watched her die."
"Who do I look like?" the girl asked.
Hazel shook her head. "Sorry, let's get back to work."
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"Thanks for this, man," Travis said. Connor held the paper in his hand.
The Latino smiled as he flipped through the money, "No problem. Have fun on New Year's."
Connor waved, "Thanks. We will."
Quite short but oh well. Also, sometimes my page breaks don't show so I apologize for that. Next on the agenda, i'm going to reply to all the guest review because, I can't PM them if they don't have an account. (More notes after this so you can skip to that)
lyne: Awesome story pls keep updating
Lol, I will. :)
Guest: Love
Thank you!
Alejandro: I love your story and I want to know more about it; anoher chapter soon, please )
Thanks for reviewing. :)
Ariana noir gran: hate it but respect it wont say hate comments many things i like and not like so yeah j wil keep eading it to see hos will it get better
Um...okay? If you hate it, that's fine you can read something else.
ABC123: Wow... awesome twist on this! I luv it... ️
Thank you!
Guest: really liking the plot and that sentence does remind me of forensic files. you know stashing the evidence and you continue with regular updates because so far it's really interesting.
Lol, thanks. I do love that show. :)
Guest: I love it so far and I kinda want to cry, but over all its frustrating me how they forgot each other and I want them to fall all over again for each other and later know that they were already together before. It be so beautiful. I want to know! *wails*
Thank you for reviewing. Don't worry, they will remember everything eventually. :)
Guest: Really great chapter, loving the story so far.
Thank you!
Guest: Wow, I'm surprised. I woke up and saw two updates and all I could think was yes. I love the story but also want percabeth to happen sooner that later. But I also want to see them fall in love and will it be one where they fall in love all over again and then realize they already shared a past? That seems pretty wicked to me.
Thank you. The two updates was kind of a mistake, lol. And percabeth does happen down the road, unfortunately.
GuardianGirl24: That was sad.
It kinda was. :( (this was for chapter 1 for anybody wondering)
GuardianGirl24: Suspenseful chapter.
I hope that's a good thing.
GuardianGirl24: Good chapter.
GuardianGirl24: Really good chapter.
GuardianGirl24: Awesome chapter.
GuardianGirl24: That was different.
I like how your comments get better and better. :)
GuardianGirl24: Great chapter.
Thanks
Angel: Before I begin my review, I would like to state I'm have an account on FFN but for done reason I'm unable to login on, my phone. I'm Princess Of Flames. Nice to read your story.
Alright, lets get on with the review!
I generally don't read mortal AUs but your story is really good and I really enjoy every not of it though your story has it's moments when out feels like it's on fast forward and things happen so fast you want it to slow down a bit. I know you have this whole story written out but maybe a not more description on the emotions and the confusion and pain and everything would be nice.
Anywho, great work. Make more, update soon
Thank you for the feedback. I love constructive criticism. And about going too fast, I tend to do that a lot. I'll definitely check my chapters and maybe slow things down a bit. And I can add more emotions. There is a part where Annabeth is having a pretty emotional talk with Athena. Anyways, thank you. :) And I love the word anywho. :D
Angel: Awwwwww! The family bonding was so cute! I loved it especially little Olivia! I love her! Please more Olivia and daddy Percy moment s! They are so adorable
I love Olivia too.
Somebody: Great job! This story is amazing! Love it, keep going, you're awesome. :)
Thank you so much! You're awesome too.
Me: Ah... Track and field... The memories of failing miserably then laughing my head off about it...
Track and field, is a pain, isn't it? :)
Abc123: Oooh liking the storyyyy.
Thank you!
Okay, now that that's done, reminder, I can't reply to your comments if your PM box is closed so open it if you want me to reply. :) Also, vote on the poll, Jackson is now winning! That poll will be open for a while, so don't worry. Also, do y'all want the Everything shorts or naw! Thank you for reviewing, favourting, following and everything. Thank you so so much!
~Mimi
Review goal: 80
PS: I'm sorry this chapter is half reviews and author note. .